The Source Martial Era

The writing is pretty good. The author's writing style is not top-notch, but he writes it with great care. I haven't read a mindless novel for a long time. The IQs of the protagonist and villain are online, the protagonist is decisive but not murderous, and the writing also has a sense of humor. I suggest you play with some jokes, don't go too far, it will be too abrupt, and add a little more to add a bit of interest. I also hope that it can be written as a team. This is just my idea. The author does not need to follow my opinion. I just think that the team is more powerful, and I prefer team writing. I hope the author will keep up the good work, and the best thing is not to end it. The author's first book was already unfinished.

It can be seen that it is really well-intentioned, and the author's level is indeed quite good, but the updates are really too slow. Although it is said that good things take a long time, sometimes it is updated every ten or twenty days. This is really unfriendly to readers who are chasing books. This may have dissuaded three-quarters of the readers. Otherwise, it should be quite popular. After all, the settings and writing are okay.

Comprehensive evaluation: It's okay, it can be read, and it meets the 9.2-Point standard. Deduction points based on 9.5 Points: The setting is a bit immature, the "heroine" has a sisterly personality, and the plot didn't give me the feeling that it looked good (that is, it wasn't amazing). If you are short of books, you can take a look. If you are not short of books, you can add a bookshelf first and wait for the lack of books to take a look. Although it is not a high-quality product, it can still pass the time. I still maintain my original review, but I feel like I can't stand it any longer. (Here are the reasons) This book was written by the author in order to export his own values ​​and criticize social phenomena, so the pace of the story is slow and half-hearted, and there is a lot of space to repeatedly talk about his values ​​(If you can do good things, do good things, the freedom of the strong should be bounded by the freedom of the weak, do what you want) This is the key point. I can accept writing it once or twice, but I keep changing the method over and over again, using different methods and different stories to write about values in a simple way (simple meaning is that what he is saying is too easy to understand). It's like a person keeps telling you that this is right, well, this is right, you should do this. Although this value is indeed in line with the core values of socialism, it also makes me feel awkward (do you think I don't know this is right?). I am not antisocial, nor can I not understand this sense of justice. Male protagonist, the protagonists in most of the novels I have read before do good deeds when they can, but the difference with this one is that they did not reflect afterwards on whether I should do this (this author likes to reflect after writing about doing good deeds, asking himself whether I should do this, and then I want to do this). The expression was too deliberate, which made it awkward for me to watch (like we all know that the protagonist is a good person, and then the author keeps repeating that the protagonist is a good person, the protagonist is a good person, the protagonist is a good person), and yes, it is also annoying. I can only say that the new author is still too immature. He wants to write well but his expression is too deliberate. He is so eloquent, so eloquent, and this empty truth shocked me without concealment. It gave me an intuitive feeling like a childish child showing off his three views (values, life, world view). It is still the same sentence, it is too annoying and embarrassing. My evaluation is the Great Principle Edition Jiahao. (Don't say that I don't understand the author. I feel like him so deeply. I once thought about writing a novel to express my three views. Not to mention the plot, what I wrote must have content that I find annoying and embarrassing now, because my purpose is the same as him: I want to export my three views, let others agree with me, and let them know that I am "right". Such a purpose is too strong and I have no writing experience. It is really difficult not to have the problems I mentioned. Plus, the plot is not fast, and it is even harder to watch.) After all, it's still a problem for new authors. So I suggest you watch it first, and if you can't stand it, stop watching it, and don't embarrass yourself.

Book review, there are many details that need to be read carefully. The author has also dug a lot of holes. Most of them have been filled in at present. After writing so many chapters, the name of the protagonist has not been revealed. I think when the protagonist says his name, that part is absolutely special. The author has created every character They are all very interesting, the language of the article is fluent, and the key points can be grasped when describing things. The article is not procrastinating and does not feel lengthy. With more than 400,000 words, I feel that I have just started writing it and have not officially entered the main plot. I feel that it has been written a little bit. However, the length of the article is short and concise, and it is worth reading. Opinion, I feel that the fighting scenes are not as well grasped as the plot. I suggest that the author can watch fighting videos or fighting terminology. Also, I think that I can add self-development on the original skills to have more skills and smoother picture descriptions. In this way, I think The fighting scenes will be particularly exciting. For example, the clone of Thunder and Lightning can be developed. It will explode directly after being attacked. This is not very pleasant, but overall, this is a rare and good book. As long as you keep updating, I will keep following you and I will also help you recommend books. Come on! I hope your writing will get better and better! ! Let me ask you a question. When you are reading a book, have you ever met the kind of person who feels like he knows everything and can point out the world? They say that the author's writing is not good, that this writing is not good, that it should be written like this here, and that should be written there (Author: Come on, I'll give you the pen and you write). I don't know how long they have been reading the book? When I read their comments, I felt a sense of superiority. Why? I have only been reading for 10 years, and I am considered a novice in reading novels. The people around me are all people who have been reading novels for more than 20 years. They have spent their entire youth reading novels, which is beside the point. Those who point the way to the country, then you really point the country. You just stated the problem, but your questions are still mindless. Even if the questions you ask are reasonable, why are you so awesome? Why don't you just ask the questions and not solve the problems? If you scold the author and only talk about the problem but not the solution, what is the difference between this and scolding?

It's a pretty good book. Its genre is a bit like "Nine Stars Poisonous Milk" and "There's a Ghost in My Body". It has very positive values ​​and I felt particularly comfortable after reading it.

This writing is good, slow-burning, and the protagonist's powerful source makes people feel comfortable. I hope the author can be more perfect and careful. I hope the author can summarize the character's skill details every fifty or hundred pictures, so as to avoid confusion in the later stage to a large extent. In addition, you must be careful about the plot and details. Many novels are ruined by small loopholes in the plot and the ratings are lowered. Some readers with obsessive-compulsive disorder will even criticize and give low ratings at once.

It is well written and self-contained. In the process of depicting the characters in the story, it reflects some real-world phenomena. What is commendable is that it establishes positive energy and positive spiritual power. Thank you writer.

Really beautiful Not mindless anyway Relaxed I haven't commented much after reading about 10 chapters. Come on, writer

I have seen more than 300 chapters. The author writes very seriously, with reasonable logic, foreshadowing, and foreshadowing. The development of the plot and the words and deeds of the characters have reasonable explanations. The information that the characters in the book can know is also isolated as much as possible. There is no God's perspective on the pig's feet, and the author does not use it to make the words and deeds of the pig's feet. The most rare thing is that this book seems to be discussing with readers the way people get along with each other, between the upper class and the lower class. It has the ideals in books and news broadcasts, and more realistic human nature, which is consistent with current social phenomena. I secretly believe that if you want the character to be vivid, you should actually stand in the character's perspective and let him live, think, and make choices for himself, which can also resonate with readers. Finally, I would like to make some comments. The handling of dialogue between characters in the book is slightly lacking, especially the few scenes of dialogue between characters, such as the banter between Li Tianyuan and Chu Miao in Chapter 338. The information revealed is very important, but it is embarrassing. Alas, I have never seen the big shots, so I don't know if they are old and dishonest. It can be foreshadowed through the perspective of a third person that Li Tianyuan is a supporter of Bai You.

I have been reading this book for 7.8 Years, and this is my first review. The subject matter is very novel, and the content is also very good. It can be seen that the author is very careful in conceiving and creating. With pictures and other things, it instantly makes the picture feel. Come on, author. As your first book, I hope it won't be unfinished. Haha.