Spirit Taming Daily Life: I Can Evolve Origin Spirits into Special Species

From the previous stage to the awakening stage, it can be seen that the author's writing style is excellent. Appropriate narration adds interest. There are not too many cheats and reasonable cheats. There is a moderate amount of foreshadowing. Personal summary. If it continues, it will definitely be one of the pinnacle works of beast-controlling novels in the future. High praise. If I ask you to rate it, it can be compared with Samsara Paradise, Sanctuary Paradise, Favored Charm, Immortality with One Thought, Unscientific Beast-controlling Cell Prison, I Have an Adventure House, Miracle Summoner and other works. Believe me, I started reading many famous novels before they were famous. I am one of the first readers of Adventure House, Samsara Paradise and other works. I think this book has great potential! It is recommended to write an outline first, but not to overdo it. Predict the foreshadowing in advance and continue writing seriously. It definitely has the potential to become a masterpiece. I have read thousands of novels and rarely commented on it. This is definitely a great novel with potential. If written well, it will definitely be a breath of fresh air for Tomato. It is recommended to write long articles. Only long articles have development potential. Otherwise, no one will read them if they are too short. There are very few short articles that are truly famous works.

The writing is good, but it has a lot of problems for me First of all, in the beast-taming novels, there are not as many descriptions of getting along with one's own taming spirit as there are with the heroine. There are no details about daily interactions with the taming beasts and training. The battles with the taming beasts take place every second. They say that commanding is strong, but I really don't see where the strength lies. If you fight well and hide well, you must be good at commanding? Even boasting about it. Speaking of command, at least multiple characters and multiple skills must coordinate with each other. I can't see what command means if I just use one spirit and one routine over and over again. Then, the description of the protagonist is also very strange. It is said that the protagonist is cautious. The dark source spirit in his body has affected his character and he does not tell his family. He just knows how to find a solution. He says that the protagonist wants to explore his life experience, become stronger, and sleep in class every day. He sleeps after class, and also sets a fixed training time of two or three hours. I really don't know what the protagonist is doing after class. The protagonist is said to be strong. He is asked by a strange woman to do this and that, and he has no resistance at all. You are so strong only for little kids of the same age, right? There are some details that I won't go into, such as beast-controlling skill levels, secret treasures and spiritual objects, world view backgrounds and other settings. I have read more than 30 chapters, but I haven't seen them. Water should not be all water in daily life.

The first book review reader (´-ω-`) It's beautiful, I love reading it, the writing is warm, and the narrations in the book are also interesting. Is the heroine Fang Zhixia? I like it very much, but I also like the teacher Xiao Youmi who keeps meowing. 😘 Can the author tell me if it is single or multiple!

Newbie, new book, please point out if there is anything poorly written [send your heart]

From the prologue to 004, the main plot has not been reached, and the prologue is too long and messy. I was confused when I saw it. There are also voice-overs, narrations, and all kinds of extreme dramas in parentheses. I can't help but get involved (voice-over). This is still reading. I tried listening to the book and it was even more uncomfortable. Then there is the plot. There is not much plot, most of it is psychological activities, expressions, etc. To be honest, this thing takes up too much space. It gives the impression that it is just psychological activities, etc. 1/3 Author's voiceover, etc. 1/3 Plot 1/3. If you read it like this, it will feel very long-winded. It may be okay to read immersively without having anything to do, but most of it If you listen to the book or take the time to read it, you will feel very uncomfortable. It feels too long-winded and impossible to relate to. The other one is the characterization. I don't know if it is because I was affected by the voice-over for personal reasons or if it is because of the characters. I just remember a few of the characters: a mouse man, a lizard, an urgent one, and Grandpa Crane, the protagonist and the heroine, and the impression is not very deep. Sometimes you should write more about the plot and other characters, and don't keep thinking about it. Otherwise, you will forget to go back to what you wrote in the last chapter and the next. This book has no impression at all. To put it bluntly, the writing is too messy. Then there is the heroine. The length is too long. It is only 12. Even if you fall in love, you don't need to be so early. With so much space, I feel that the heroine is the protagonist.

After reading Chapter 12, it's really awkward to say whether it's sweet or not, and I'm curious about one thing: I woke up at the age of 12, but before I woke up, didn't I study at home and not go to school? Personally, I think it can be sweet, but too much will make you tired. I don't know if you are planning to write a male channel or a female channel. In a male channel, you can write about love, after all, it is a daily life, but the main line is to reach the top after all. In addition, if you write this, it is a genius article, so you need to have many geniuses around you to highlight the protagonist. Okay, that's all I'll say. This is my review before Chapter 12. I'll look at it later.

Great book!!!!!

It's good-looking, recommended, very good-looking, the score can reach 9.1 Or above, but there are too few people watching it, and then the chapter preface has a really big impact. It is recommended that it be introduced after the beginning of chapter 36. Personally, I feel that the content described in the third chapter preface is a bit irrelevant. Let's talk about the three golden pictures. The first one is really attractive. If you put the content of Chapter 4 at the front, it is estimated that the audience retention will be higher. There is also the process of the Riddler in this book. I personally feel that this is the main line of this book, which revolves around life experience, becoming stronger, searching, and emotions. It's really beautiful in the end, come on 😘 Oh, by the way, I forgot something about time! Time! Time! Time! Time! Time span, how many photos have there been, and now it's still [rolling eyes][rolling eyes][rolling eyes]

At present, it seems that the world view is okay and the system is complete. There are no obvious poisonous points. I will give it five stars. However, I think it is too much for you to use the golden three chapters [laughing]. Normally, you can know the general world view after reading the first three chapters. My dear, you just used the prologue. There are a lot of inner dramas and narrations at the beginning, which is really a bit dissatisfied. I hope the author can write better and better, and have a good year in 2025 ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

The author specified that he played too much with the Star Dome Railway [snickering][snickering][snickering]