Dragon Raja: Lu Mingfei Returns from Powa

Lu Mingfei's parallel universe has added a new general [laughter]

The writing is very good. It would be even better if Dante and the others could come to this world. I want to see Dante kill Herzog!

It feels good. The protagonist basically has no trace of Shao Zai in the original work, but his character is okay. There are enough tiles but not enough. The downfall is that I don't know whether the NPC is the female supporting character or the female protagonist, and whose name is Li. The emotional scenes between the two are completely impossible to watch directly. If it is to give Mingfei a sense of belonging, it seems to be too much. If it is the female protagonist, it is completely poisonous, so I am not in the mood to watch it after about 90 chapters. And looking at the catalog, updates are really urgent. I give it a seven and a half out of ten. You can still watch it if you skip the emotional scenes.

This book is very interesting, but I can't get enough of it! I'm just… Waiting, waiting for your update.[Crying] I'm... Waiting for your update. [Cry]

I feel that while it is serious, it also has a funny style. The author should write more nonsense [laughter]

The rhythm and details are very well described, and it has the feeling of rendering the environment in the early stage of Jiangnan. You know why I say early stage, because the writing in the later stage of Jiangnan is really messy. Moreover, the character's personality and behavior are very consistent with the original character. Of course, Lu Mingfei in this book has definitely formed a new style. I hope the author will continue to expand new boundaries. The current fans are really about to help Jiang Nan finish the book. I should understand the reasons why some people give this evaluation. One of the reasons is the choice of the emotional line of the original characters. The heroine who descends from the sky and too many side branches and festivals, as well as involving other characters from other world views of the Dragon Clan, will affect some of the readers' expectations of the original. At least the heroine who descends from the sky is indeed bad. The author seems to be unable to give full play to his creative desires, so he forgot that this is a second creation based on the original work. If it is a completely original new story, not a story about the dragon family, there will be no such problems.

The writing is very good, and the rhythm is well grasped. It is slow-burning, but the amount of text is too small, and the amount of background story inserted seems too much (it feels like it is taking over the main role). This will make it appear that the protagonist's perspective is relatively small and the sense of substitution is not strong. The author can try to insert part of the background first, and then elaborate on it when the plot requires it (personal suggestion) [Blow a kiss]

At least it's much better than the senior student in Jiangnan who has bouts of youthful illness from time to time and is full of ideas🤗

Which boss opened the trumpet [Thinking] There is a reason for the low rating

Never underestimate this novel. It is different from previous second creations and is based on the original work. The author has his own ideas and considerations. You can think that this is a new novel based on the Dragon Clan. It is quite excellent. It reminds me of the first time I read the Dragon Clan. I was confused about Jiangnan's writing style. I really can't understand it without any literary literacy. Of course, I also learned a lot. If you like articles similar to the Dragon Clan, this is a rare masterpiece. After all, who doesn't want to see a child holding a Yama sword and driving a real demon? He's seriously ill. Oh, by the way, don't look at the ratings. It's useless. Come on, author (ง •̀_•́)ง