Transmigrated into a Grandpa, Embracing the Laid-Back Life

Third-party education, social experience, principles, and cultivation are explained carefully and thoroughly. If junior high school students who are new to novels read this, it might be able to give them some direction. I hope there won't be a female protagonist in the later stages, and the protagonist will act low-key and not show off. Write more about educational and social experiences. Lots of updates. This is the first novel I've followed up on in so many years, so don't let it suck. Prepare for the second brush to review the past and learn the new

What should I say? After reading these 40 chapters in one go, I can't say enough about how good it is. I feel that if this book can last to the end, it will not be inferior to other books with a score of 9 or above. I feel that the writing style is not like what Old Tomato can have. The lack of ratings is just that too few people have read it. There is nothing to say about the characters of the two protagonists. The transformation of the young apprentice is subtle and not so sudden. The wisdom of the protagonist is also really intertwined. It is worth reading.

The content is pretty good, but I deducted one point because it uses AI. The idea is pretty good, and the writing relies on AI. 😂😂😂

All in all, the shortcomings are not hidden, it is very good in 🍅, even if some places use AI, it is not that confusing; the advantage of this book is that the author has his own set of logical thinking, each character does not have an NPC feeling, the character interaction design is reasonable, the behavior is also very reasonable, the character has not collapsed, etc. It is a serious book; lacking The points are that the AI feels heavy, there are too many embellishments and descriptions, the rhythm is fast and a little slow at the same time, and the grasp of the main plot and branch plots is too close, etc.; There is a lot of room for improvement, and the theme is good. I hope the author believes in himself and does not take the wrong path of commercial routine writing. As long as you keep the overall story well written, it will be good.

Not bad, not bad. Unexpected novelty. It's not a cliche Long Aotian plot. There's no sticky love. There's no harem beauties. It's not a drama about meeting an official lady every now and then, selling her body to bury her father, or a brothel girl being forced to sell herself. What I saw was the protagonist teaching a child who has to accept the situation to survive and work hard for his family. At first glance, the subject matter is still the same as binding an old man, but the content determines success or failure. Although I was always a little uncomfortable with the inner drama of the protagonist when I first read it (because the author is old like me, the whole bracket represents the inner thoughts of the protagonist_(:з ∠)_), but after reading it, I got used to it. Many people think it is a bit obscene for the protagonist to talk so much, but I think it is okay. Originally, the style of this article is not particularly depressing and slap-in-the-face. The protagonist originally said from the beginning that he is a modern person who time-travels, and he is also a soul-body time-traveler, and he has not spoken to anyone for five hundred years. Some things are still understandable (such as chatterbox). In my opinion, this article can be a good novel, but it is a little lacking. I am looking forward to what the author's boy will grow into. I also hope that the protagonist's wish to lie down and think about salted fish can come true (because I want it too｡°(°¯᷄◠¯᷅°)°｡) It's so good-looking, so good-looking, I finally liked it for fifty chapters and it's gone🥺 The author's writing is beautiful and the pace is tight. It really shows the protagonist's difficulties. I like this. And I also said before that this book is not the kind of copy that Long Aotian makes. So when I read it, there were always many people talking about why Su Ming didn't resist and was suppressed. But I didn't think about it. Su Ming didn't have any gold fingers. His biggest gold finger was the hard work of the protagonist and himself. He was willing to listen and learn, not numb or dependent. There may be a lot of flaws in careful analysis, but the flaws are not hidden. The protagonist has no background, and his cultivation is nothing more than practicing Qi. In my opinion, this book does not focus on fighting monsters and upgrading, but the protagonist's own growth is not easy. From an ordinary ordinary person to now stepping into the world of cultivating immortals. From a child with a runny nose who only cares about playing, step by step to the ups and downs in the officialdom. Being framed, being hunted, fighting for one breath and dying, but also dying with others. This is growth. Isn't it much better than a cool novel about killing people all the way? Hey, I originally wanted to ask if Su Ming would have a Cp in the future, but now that I think about it, it's okay to have one. After all, it's okay if the main character doesn't have it🤦 Because I really can't bear to look at each other and blush, accidentally holding hands and kissing the mouth, etc. Because the current rhythm is fine, and there is no excessive description of a certain person's appearance. All in all, it feels good to me. (As for objecting to CP, I read a novel before. The heroine didn't have a partner in the early stage, but a man suddenly appeared in the later stage. The man looked down on people in the early stage, and later became irritated and irritated towards people. He always described the heroine's opinion of the man, pay attention to him, etc. It was disgusting. That article was seriously criticized by many people in the later stage. So now I am particularly disgusted by the sudden appearance.)

There are no cliche slap-in-the-face, Long Aotian plots. There are also no strange descriptions of women. It can be seen from the author's writing that the two protagonists regard each other as family members who are both teachers and friends. It can be seen that the male protagonist's love for Lin Zao has gone beyond simple teaching and regarded him as a family member. During the time when he disappeared, although he said that he had some feelings for himself. Confusion about the future, but more worries about the master, and Lin no longer simply regards the protagonist as a shelter. It can be seen from the article that he not only teaches the protagonist how to behave, but also gives everything he has to survive. Doesn't this completely treat the protagonist as his own child? This is so well written that I will learn knowledge from this article without even realizing it. It feels very warm again. I hope there won't be those clichéd supporting female leads or vulgar plots in the future. Come on

I finally found something worth seeing in the shit 😢. Although it's not amazing, the writing is pretty good. First, the characters are also very fleshed out, and the transformation process of the supporting characters is also handled very smoothly. Second, there are no surprises. The protagonist (although the Ringwraith himself is the protagonist, but Su Ming is the focus of the author's writing) is not the kind of weakling who only relies on his master, but also has his own insights and perseverance. Third, the pace is not too fast. Generally speaking, you can get started in about twenty chapters. This book is different. The setting is complete and logical. The process of touching the threshold of cultivating an immortal as a mortal is very detailed. The transition period is not boring and it is very interesting. The distribution of plot ups and downs and turning points is also very good. I want to see Brother Xu 😢

I think the subject matter is really novel, and I have read a lot of old-father stories, most of which are Dihualiu or the protagonists. I have never seen this kind of story about cultivating immortals by deceiving disciples and starting from the imperial examination. It is quite interesting. I believe that as long as the author can improve the rating, it will be up soon. Although I don't care much about whether AI is used in the article, as long as the plot is good, the word description contains many inexplicable metaphors such as "battering ram" and "energy storage pool". It is obviously a novel about cultivating immortals.

Yes, I like it very much. This is much better than those with the name of being a bitch and pretending to be the Dragon King. Although the pace is slow and the plot is a bit contradictory, it is still a good work, but there are many places that need to be improved.

It's good-looking. Full marks for the author's politics💯. It's super good-looking and interlocking. After reading each small storyline, I have no idea about the number of words. Each character is distinct. It's worth collecting ps: There are so many inner dramas, the author could do with less of this later.