(A rough practice piece, not recommended)
(Second male lead takes the spotlight, tragic ending + both reborn + regretful pursuit + faux siblings)
Xiao Jin was born a harbinger of doom. He caused his mother's death as a child, was abandoned by his father, and ended up fighting stray dogs for scraps. Yet he was also incredibly lucky: in Jiangnan, he met Song Manor's young lady, who protected him and kept him safe for the rest of his life.
But after being reborn, Jia'an wanted to stay far away from this little madman.
Things did not go as she wished.
Still, the little madman seemed to have changed somehow.
He was meek and obedient, keeping his claws sheathed. He even let Song Jia'an marry someone else. Though all seemed calm and peaceful, on their wedding night he stood outside their bridal chamber, weeping tears of blood.
All it took was one question from Jia'an: “Xiao Jin, are you cold?”
The youth immediately collapsed to his knees, begging his A-Jie hoarsely, “Please don't marry him, all right?”
Sadly, the person standing before him was not his Jia'an A-Jie.
She was merely a wisp of a soul from another world.
And so Xiao Jin was doomed to live in pain for the rest of his life.
Never to see Jia'an again.
I absolutely love it! Xiao Jin truly loves Jia An, but he loved her the wrong way. Otherwise, they would have been absolutely happy in their past life. The current Jia An, who is from another world, taught Xiao Jin what love is: restraint and the desire for her happiness. I hope Zhong Li Chen doesn't die from his illness later on 😢😢 I also have high hopes for Zhong Li Wan.
Actually, until I saw the ending, I always thought the second male lead would end up with the female lead, so I was quite angry in the middle of the story. I thought, "Zhong Lichen and the female lead love each other so much, what reason would he have to be with the male lead?" Now that I've finished reading, I understand.
I feel like this will be great too. I'm rooting for my wife! Go go go! [Upvote] [Currently working on a draft]
I'm begging you, please don't let Zhong Li Chen die later on!!!
It's a good show, even though it might be a bit short, but the plot really resonated with me.
Very creative, great, beautiful!
This book is like a spring rain, a gentle, heart-wrenching drizzle that's worth reading in a short time.
I love it so much!
It's perfect. I've never liked tragic ending stories, but I love this one. The author's writing style is just right for me.
It's beautiful, but also a bit heartbreaking.