One Piece: The Strongest Admiral Ends the Age of Pirates

It's very interesting~ I just hope that the author can write the protagonist of the original world~ I hope that the protagonist of the original Shijie can be compared with the protagonist of the current world~ It doesn't matter, you can write it or not~ I will give you an opinion

Yes, but the two pirate worlds are parallel worlds. Brothers who want to watch it must regard both worlds as parallel worlds of pirates. If it is too serious, there are too many places to complain about.

So far, I don't think there's anything bad about it. It's just a common problem in every fanfic. Why do you answer the question so many times and the protagonist's name is missing? No one suspects it. Everything else is fine [Chigua] [Chigua] [Chigua]

Most of the content is quite good, and it makes up for a lot of regrets. There are just some minor problems. It would be better if it could be corrected. This is not a guide, just normal thoughts and suggestions after reading it, not a criticism. In the original world, when everyone was going crazy, the world where the protagonist lived was peaceful and quiet. I knew that the author might want to express the importance of the protagonist's existence. However, watching the comparison video, it seems that now it is only about the world where the protagonist lives. Obviously, the original world should be watched most, isn't it? Get some reflection from it. The world where the protagonist is in cannot see the situation on the opposite side at all. In fact, I personally feel that it is better to be able to see it. If it is like this, if the world where the protagonist is in fights, wouldn't the original world be completely invisible? To be honest, who is the protagonist pretending to be like? [Laughing and crying]

Very beautiful. Well, if I guess correctly, what follows is probably how Wulaoxing and Im will die.

Thank you author! In fact, in my personal opinion, most characters in current time are a bit OOC, of ​​course because time travelers have extenuating circumstances! What I really want to thank is the way my family members (good friends, lovers) behaved when they were hostile to me. I have always been locked in the entangled thought of "either pretend to kill, or kill and then resurrect." After reading your book, my mind suddenly opened up. Yes, as long as you have justice in your heart, then no matter what you do, it is right! Thanks! [Top post][Top post][Top post][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

It looks good, for me personally, it's just a personal opinion, it doesn't represent everyone. I think it looks good. The author doesn't want to be a eunuch. Some people may say it doesn't look good, or even give bad reviews, but I think it's good! I hope the author will not be affected by words! Good job! Others don't like it, but there are still people who like it.

It looks great. I recommend it. I highly recommend it. The timeline is almost intact This is a relatively good-looking pirate novel. Other pirate novels are already more poisonous than others. Although there are some flaws in the plot of the three little ones, and you may find it addictive, you can still watch it. There are no big problems. The only problem is Sabo's identity. I have probably figured it out with age. The protagonist will be a little arrogant, but most of them still express the general situation. And the part where War General Luffy saves Ace is not too bad. The three of them have been together since childhood, and their relationship is closer than that of their own grandfathers. Save me, this is not General Luffy's fault, it is a mistake in the world view. Strong strength can explain everything, and what's more, the original world is not the current world, and the navy of the current world was not defeated anyway. It is not mainly to show how strong the world is. It just saw the protagonist change, Ace was executed, and Sabo was bombarded, which also made them fall in love with the navy. This is also a good ending. Luffy and the others were also allowed to lay the foundation, unlike the original world where they were beaten and eaten and then left to rot. (There are also some flaws. A newbie is starting a book and just needs to change it. The character is not ruined. It probably means there is no heroine. Okay, nothing more to say.)

It's okay to be more funny. Come on, author

Please keep updating, author, I hope to add one more chapter every day. Of course, if it doesn't work, I won't force it.