A Pokemon Traveler in One Piece

I wrote it during my spare time, so it will be slower [Salute]

It's a pretty good group portrait. Everyone has their own plot, and it doesn't overly steal the protagonist's role. It also continues the nonsensical style of One Piece. It's easy to watch and doesn't burn your brain. The characters are a bit right, but it may be a bit confusing for people who don't watch One Piece.

Super super good! ! ! It's just that the author's writing style is a bit weak, please work hard! Love this book! ! !

It's very beautiful. I searched around for similar ones and this one is the one I'm most satisfied with.

I briefly read a few chapters. The subject matter is very novel, but the author's writing is not very good. Keep up the good work [Love]

Let's start grading now. If the book becomes popular, we will become old fans [laughing]

The writing is a bit immature, but overall there's nothing wrong with it. But there are a few points that the author can pay a little attention to: ① Some information about Pokémon is wrong. For example, Arteas is a fantasy beast rather than a mythical beast; Metagross' flash is white, not gray. ② Secondly, some fighting scenes in the original work were omitted due to the addition of the protagonist. For example, in Sauron vs. Mr. 1 In Alabasta, Sauron upgrades and cuts off steel. This is a sign that Sauron has transformed from a swordsman to a swordsman. He listens to the breath of all things when he is on the verge of death. There is no such plot in the novel, which means that Sauron's strength is still an important detail that the swordsman is an original character whose combat power has been improved. The protagonist's habit of taking out Pokémon whenever something goes wrong needs to be corrected. At least he can't just skip the fights, otherwise he won't get much improvement if he relies solely on Pokémon abilities all the way. ③The last thing is that the plot does not need to move so fast. Many readers who are willing to stay and watch the boat flow pay attention to the original work and the friendship and plot in the original drama. So the author can write more plots in this aspect Finally, this book is a new one, the number of words has not increased, and the subject matter is relatively new, so it is normal that there are few readers. But don't panic, it's a new book after all ε٩(๑> ₃ <)۶з The author is really listening and helping me [almost crying] It's a new book, so don't worry, just update it steadily. The main reason is that there are so few books of this type [crying] [crying]

Your resurrection was a bit sudden [face covering]

It's beautiful, it's the type I've always wanted to see, but updates are a bit slow [shy]

The plot is very good, it would be better if there were a few mythical beasts, such as the three holy birds, the nightmare god, the jet brother and sister and other jobless beasts.