Pokemon: My Volcarona Is a Second-Generation One

The elves are very nice to watch and all have their own personalities, but there are a lot of females. Don't be the king of all females. The author writes well but it's not enough to read. When will the update be released with only a dozen chapters in a week? Can there be more updates next week on Qingming Festival? The protagonist elf feels that he can use the power of Riolu Waveguide and the flash of self-confidence. Overlord Gyarados or Duolong (Duolong is really handsome and fast) Attack is not low), there is no Gigantamax to publish. The premise is that there is a super powerful backstage, or the protagonist can have a super powerful master, and whether the protagonist's parents have any hidden identities. These are the suggestions I want to give. I wish the author this book will get better and better. I hope the author will not finish it. It is really interesting! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

I hope insect elves can appear more often. In many novels, insect elves don't appear.

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I always felt like there was something wrong, but I couldn't figure out where the problem was. It was only then that I realized there was something wrong with the hang-up. I don't know if it was because the author was writing a book for the first time. My personal feeling is as follows: Combine the advantages of the three protagonists 1. First of all, my family background is actually good. There is no need to go to the elf house arranged by the school to choose Pokémon. I read the comment and the author explained that for example, the mother is younger and may not have much background, but at least you did not mention it in the text. Secondly, I think no matter how short it is, it should be better than school. 2. The background of Xiao Chongchong is so awesome that the plug-in felt useful in the early stage but not very useful. I even felt that the background was too complicated, just like picking up a baby at the beginning and then finding out that it was the prince whose country was destroyed, an orphan of the Zhao family. The beginning is not a relaxing tone. Instead of relaxing, readers will become more tired while reading. 3. Plug-in 2 and 3 are in conflict with each other in my opinion. It's absolutely fine to remove one of them. You are so awesome, and the plug-in will not be able to show any effect. Next, let's talk about the plot. First, let's look at the first few chapters. It's obvious from the beginning that there are too many elements. The evolution key at the beginning has no possibility of development in the short term. The first one is a traditional hot chicken pet (which has some shortcomings, is weak, and is not chosen by others) and the second one is the same. Learn to ridicule, Part 3 and the dirty deeds of the foster house, Part 4 even describes the protagonist's mother's hard work to turn her hair gray, which feels a bit too sensational. I think the protagonist's passionate secondary speech is okay, but this brief profile feels too sensational. If the three protagonists' advantage points all appear at the same time, there will be some problems. Suppose, if you choose the bug given by your mother at the beginning, with normal talent, you can avoid going to the school breeding house, and there will be less abrupt arguments with the person in charge, and ridicule from students. Secondly, the novice gift package can give you a reasonable plug-in, such as a talent pill, which feels a little smoother. Although I didn't see the back part, I wrote a comment. It was severely suppressed. I was cheated, but suppressed again. The level is low, but he is always in the high-level vortex. There are also some comments about the nightmare god who actually has a priesthood in the Lu family. In the middle of the game, he suddenly announced that he could not use the power of Chang Qing. The villain seemed very superficial, too superficial, and seemed to have a logical mind. I say this not to criticize, but to hope that things will be better in the future! Come on!

I think it's pretty good, much better than other random starts. It's okay to hang up, the Burning Worm is partially sealed, and Magearna is fully sealed, so there's no big problem. I wish there was an evil Zoroa [shy]

I haven't read much at the moment. I've read Chapter 42. I'll tell you a bit about my reading experience for everyone's reference. I think it's pretty good now, but I feel the writing is a little awkward and a bit toxic. If you read it quickly, friends who don't think carefully will still have no problem reading it. If you read it carefully and ponder it carefully, you'll see. It will be more uncomfortable, because some parts cannot withstand deep thought, and it will be very awkward to read. This book is a bit of a poisonous novel. The description of the characters' expressions and thoughts is a bit too much. Up to this point, I still don't understand what kind of book the author wants to write. The styles are quite diverse, and that's about it. If it is good later, I will review it. The above is for reference only It took me some time to read all the chapters that have been updated so far. In my personal opinion, what I wrote in the early stage was indeed a bit of a failure. I feel that this is the main reason for the low rating of this book. It will be much better if I read it later, but the character description is still a bit too much. The overall world view is pretty good. The characters of the mythical beasts are quite funny and interesting, but they lack some of the fierceness and majesty of the mythical beasts. Looking back, it can be seen that the author still understands Pokémon very well, at least not half-hearted. After reading 400 chapters, it feels a bit boring and the transition time is a bit long. The above are my reading feelings and are for reference only.

Respecting the original game settings, there are no some unnatural Pokémon. The battles focus on basic methods, and a certain degree of realistic fantasy is carried out on the basis of respecting the original PVP skills. The writing is smooth, the protagonist has a brain, and there is no overly pretentious and slap-in-the-face plot. The selection of elves is quite good. They all have both strength and good looks. They are popular in singles. They are not as popular as the brainless Wifemon and the Milk Dog. The interaction with the elves is also pretty good.

In fact, I don't understand. Arceus, as the God of Creation, has also designed many mythical beasts that can defeat him. The controller of the world can be said to be an existence beyond the world. Those are just creations who have been assigned authority in the world. Can they really surpass Arceus no matter how strong they are? Isn't that kind of existence stronger in the world? The stronger it is, especially if the stone slab is lost, it is better to say that Arceus deliberately separated it. That kind of existence can sweep the whole world with a single thought. It is not clear where the stone slab is, so is it too much to look down on the gold content of a creation god? Anyone can hit it. As for Arceus You are too naive. If you really believe it, then you are too naive. As the controller of the world, no matter what the good or evil thoughts are, it is clear at a glance. Can the little thoughts of human beings really escape that kind of mythical beast that exists from unknown time? Unless it is the same controller of the world as him, I can't think of anything else. There is no existence that can really defeat it. It feels like it just shows a benevolent side to its own creations most of the time, so it seems that it is not the strongest. The Arceus that exists in the world is just a projection or clone of it. The real body has long been pursuing stronger power.

Yes, there is nothing unacceptable for me now. Giratina's character has been well received. I have had a vision of my brother, but there is no female protagonist. It doesn't hurt to have more female Pokémon. There are no good comments about Gardevoir or Lucario in the beginning. Although I like these two, I finally got tired of them. I turned my attention to the unpopular and powerful Pokémon. I did not select popular Pokémon. There are popular and unpopular Pokémon.

For the first time, I don't reject the fact that the first elf is a woman. Burning bugs and Machiana are almost nowhere to be found, each mythical beast is like a group of living treasures, and the story of the protagonist is also very fulfilling. Highly recommended to see it.