The Three Kingdoms: Forging a Heavenly Court from the Bronze Sparrow Terrace

Very nice, not brainless and refreshing article

Except for the somewhat poisonous name of the game in the first chapter, it is very exciting, especially the description of the protagonist's abilities, a rare non-waste protagonist. After seeing the latest chapter, I would like to make two small suggestions: First, I hope that the protagonist moves as soon as possible. To put it bluntly, the protagonist's real-life safety is completely based on the idea of ​​the woman named Qin, and danger may occur at any time; second, for the big game guilds in reality, I feel that the protagonist is still too weak against them. For example, if the Mythical Guild dares to mess with the protagonist, the protagonist can completely make them unable to move through their status in the game. Now that I write it like this, I always feel a bit uncomfortable (all cats and dogs dare to touch the protagonist at will). I hope the author will seriously consider it and write more exciting content.

It's so good to write about real people. How can you not find you when you move in front of the country? Moreover, it was hinted at the beginning that various national consortiums have entered the field, saying that the world is not simple. When such an awesome character appears in the game, how could the country not look for you? Even if it does not suppress you, it will be tied to your interests. As the author's first book, it is indeed a masterpiece. It is very enjoyable to write.

This book is super good-looking, but some people may not like it when there is no unity at the beginning, but I think it can be written for thousands of chapters later. After the cultivation system is opened, it can become a fairy novel, and finally become the peak of the fairy world, return to reality, and the end of the world is coming (after all, the purpose of making this game should also be for the real world later) The world may undergo major changes, requiring humans to become stronger to cope with the future world), and all players will use their skills in the game to fight in real life again, and finally achieve peace in real life, life will gradually become unified, and then the real world may be unified. If you write according to this framework, you should be able to write a lot. If you add the number of words, it is possible to have tens of thousands of chapters. However, the author's combat power design is a bit broken. There are so many generals, counselors, buildings, women, etc., Which add more than one star to the people and soldiers in the territory. Not to mention one against ten, at least one against five. In the final battle, his elite soldiers are still the same as other people's elite soldiers, no difference. , A maximum of 1.5 Per dozen. I don't know why the setting is so strange. I keep completing tasks, and the reward bonuses are constantly increasing. It really accumulates and makes those soldiers and people really strong. Good soldiers should be close to third- and fourth-rate generals, and the people should also have other princes and Napu. Tong's elite soldiers are so strong (not the protagonist's), even an army of 200,000 ordinary people should be comparable to the 200,000 armies of other residents. The 200,000 army of the protagonist's elite soldiers should be worth at least 500,000, or even millions. One against five should not be a problem, and there are also battles among them. The formation, coordination and training are equivalent to the soldiers of the protagonist. They have the intensity of training, superb coordination, excellent equipment, skills (others also have them), and bonuses. There is really no problem with one against five, but the author's writing of combat power is very rubbish. There are so many bonuses that don't feel the same.

Very good. Online hegemony games can be regarded as high-quality products on Tomato. Great work.

Very beautiful, very very very very beautiful

I came across another masterpiece. Come on, the author.

It's rare to read a novel in Tomato.

A highly recommended online game novel. The early Three Kingdoms plot is also very well written.

It's quite interesting. The Yellow Turban Uprising gave me the feeling of watching a TV series. Attacking a city, defending a city, etc., My mind was filled with scenes of war. Of course, another suggestion is that you, the author, are suitable for writing novels without female protagonists.