Online Gaming: The Netherworld Marksman

I don't read many game novels, but I like this one very much. The logic is rigorous, the setting of the background and the direction of the plot are very good. There is a realistic plot, but I hope it won't be too much. Personally, I feel that since it is a game type and it is an immersive open world, it is better to focus on the game. Come on, I hope it can be maintained. I can be regarded as a veteran who accompanies the opening of books [laughs] After a while, I just caught up with Zhou Ben to open the chapter. Let me talk about my feelings: the beginning of the novice village is a bit long. It can be said to be a way to express the protagonist's personality, or it can be said to be a kind of accumulation of the protagonist's strength in the early stage. After all, from the setting point of view, the protagonist is a game newbie. The only thing he can rely on is his extraordinary shooting skills and perseverance. To stand out, you must have a lot of experience. It may be a bit ink for readers who have read too much fast food writing, but it is still within the acceptable range. After arriving in the main city, it slowly developed in the direction of Invincible. It is understandable that the protagonist's main strength and attack are high, but how to reflect the significance of the attribute of agility, and almost all equipment will increase the power and sensitivity. The difference lies in intelligence. In other words, the current equipment settings are only divided into physical and magic, which results in the protagonist's output attribute of the equipment wearing T is still the same. Not bad. When being beaten by a group, as long as he is not charged, he can fly a kite with ease, let alone 1v1. The most unacceptable thing to me is that Zhou Ben can go beyond level 4 to fight alone. To be honest, this is out of the normal balance that I know a game should have. I hope the author will think more about the strength of the protagonist and the balance of attributes and equipment.

Not bad, but the plot is not new enough. For example, when I saw the orphanage, I guessed that there might be a plot about the orphanage dragging cheerleaders. When I saw you renting, I guessed that it must be a female roommate. From this, I thought that the female roommate was shocked. Please wait for the plot of the series... The writing is still good. I hope the author can describe the game world more, because this is the place most likely to surprise readers.

I originally wanted to give it four stars. It describes some of the protagonist's psychological activities and behavior, and I really hate the girl Siyu. However, the other stories you wrote about the dream go back to more than ten years ago, and it feels like a traditional online game. After all, it is not a rebirth, or something that can appear in reality, so I will give it five stars. I will read the following comment. I have written all the online games. If you really write like this, author, no one will read it. Moreover, I have just seen that the protagonist Yin Yang Jian has been unlocked and has not left the novice village. It is the first time for the protagonist to play the game. Many situations are unclear. I understand. I also understand the protagonist's young and impatient temper. Therefore, the protagonist showed impatience when doing this series of tasks. I understand the impatience, but I hope the author can write a growth-oriented protagonist. After all, online games are played with many adults in the society. There is no mature character, complete experience, strong strength, joy, anger, sorrow, betrayal, and friendship. The protagonist finally relies on the protagonist's aura to become a "strong man" in the novel. No one will read such a novel, even if there are only one or two of the above, as long as the protagonist keeps changing and growing, we will continue to support you, come on!

It's a very good web article, with a smooth storyline. The writing should be simple and not sloppy. I still hope that there will be only one female protagonist. The role of the female protagonist is to enrich the character of the male protagonist. I believe this is a good step.

It's a traditional online game that I haven't seen in a long time. It looks quite comfortable. I gave up after seeing this. A person who was so persistent before changed jobs and gave up his hidden career easily. I can't accept it.

I only feel sincere when commenting after reading them all. I don't know why I rated it so low. I personally feel that the author's thinking is clear, the task growth is not abrupt, the integration is not strange, and there is no need for time travel to transition the plot, but various plots and character settings are used to complete it, and it is fascinating bit by bit. It feels like the growth process of a small character like a mortal cultivating immortality. I hope to continue to maintain this style without too much plot fluctuations and transitions little by little. At the end, it is recommended not to integrate a world-wide harem. Only natural harmony can echo the previous and later.

The plot has ups and downs, I like the grassroots transformation, it's wonderful

It's okay, and she's the only one who doesn't feel disgusted to have two girls living in her own home. She doesn't have so many ambiguous and real friends, and the protagonist has been completing tasks in the early stage and has less conflict with most players. I can't say that the firepower attracted by the female character is not there. I can only say that it is very little. Of course, the protagonist There are also top-level skills and SSS professions in the future, but reality involves too much. Once the reality is updated, a trip out can attract a lot of hatred. And by coincidence, the two female characters are still the main point of conflict at this time. I hope they don't return to reality in the future and play the game well. . . . . .

Very good, not the starting SSS talent or profession. If you like to watch the opening SSS, you can just go. I'm used to reading those kinds of articles on the Internet and here to write negative reviews!

The profession is a rare bow and arrow, and the plot is relatively reasonable. Of course it has flaws, but it is much better than the "Poison Master" next door.