Naruto's Byakugan Is Weak? What Does That Have to Do with My Heavenly Eye?

A very good book. . . The head is open well enough to see through. The pigs in the production team are more diligent than you.

It's okay. It makes you want to continue reading. Come on for more.

The writing is very good. I have always wanted to find a kind of article about cultivating immortals in the world of Naruto, but basically it is either the Long Aotian plot or the harem stallion, which satisfies all my fantasies about this kind of article.

Not bad, not bad. Naruto joins the Immortal Cultivation System, which is very interesting. I hope there will be no female protagonist or only female protagonist. Women will only affect the typing speed. It will be faster and better.

The writing is quite interesting, the writing is online, the plot is interesting, the setting is also very good, and it looks quite interesting. To briefly describe the level of writing, well, in terms of character settings, speech styles, and various smart performances, the writing can be said to be of high quality, far above the passing line, but it still feels a bit less than the top level of writing. Emmmm, as for the top-level writing style that I define... I guess no one can achieve it... At least I haven't seen it yet... Or it exists, but I don't know where... As for the plot, it can be said to be a very novel and original fanfic. At least what I saw is that the book slightly changed the original work from the beginning, gradually began to deflect the plot development of the original work, and started to make major preparations to change the plot of the original self-written plot. Looks pretty good Regarding the setting, the protagonist's golden finger is still very good, although the appearance is a bit strange, far-fetched, and a bit mysterious... However, Goldfinger's abilities still seem pretty good. It's easy to develop and has all the difficulties of development, but it's not too rigid and can only have those abilities. Generally speaking, the shortcomings are very few and pitiful, but the advantages are very strong, which greatly increases the potential of the whole book. Keep it up and work hard to update it.

"Naruto awakens electromagnetic power, electromagnetic gun teaches you how to be a human being" Protagonist Hinata Satoru, heroine Uchiha Rin 2022-5-29 2022-11-22 "I am cultivating immortality in the ninja world, killing the nine tails with the Immortal Killing Sword" The protagonist Hinata Ha, the heroine Uchiha Arashi 2023-2-22 2024-1-29 The settings of the two books are very similar.

It feels like it's been a long time since I've read a book that made my blood boil. Maybe the author does have many loose ends here. But that doesn't stop it from being an excellent book. To be honest, I'm very curious, why is this book rated so low? Oh, so annoying. Now I don't know where to find Tomato books. Some particularly bad books have exceptionally high scores for no apparent reason. On the contrary, there are some very good books, but the scores are not very high. Once you give a good review, they will say that you are a good person and you can make money together. It just feels baffling. Maybe some people do have their own favorite types of books. But I don't feel the need to maliciously suppress some okay books. At least the sentences and plot are relatively smooth, which is great, for a book in Tomato. Anyway, I just don't understand it. I don't know why, but suddenly I want to say so much. Well. Finally, I hope the author will work hard and hope you can write better. There must be more updates.

The title of the book is about cultivating immortals, which is quite majestic. However, it is about mortals cultivating immortals. It is not the kind of swaying immortal cultivation style, but the style of Han Li who struggles to grow up slowly in the struggle. I don't like it, but the writing is okay. I give it four stars.

Although the ending is not perfect, the pace is super fast and it is fun to watch. I have always felt that it is better to limit Naruto fan fiction to less than 500,000 words. The plot content can be described clearly and the pace is fast enough. All in all, this book is quite well written [like][like][like]

Full marks, the best Naruto novel in the world. Nothing else, just this Chinese Taoist plug-in makes me very happy. That sound of the sword was really on fire like all the swordsmen in Zhanshen.