Inuyasha Fanfic: Love, Souls, and Naraku

It's very beautiful, the writing is very good, and Naraku didn't fall apart for me. It's very close to the original work. The heroine has resilience, courage, and is familiar with herself, so she and Naraku developed well at the beginning. It's because of the lifespan of demons and humans that the heroine becomes different from the beginning. She becomes anxious, worried, and has low self-esteem. To be honest, I don't like this part. I feel like she has lost herself a little because of love, but it's quite real. I didn't give it five stars because the writing was a bit riddle-like in the later stages, and the connection between dreams and reality was unclear. To be honest, the past and present life of the heroine was not very clear. It was a bit foggy and made people guess (I didn't like guessing). Also, I originally thought that the heroine came from modern times and accidentally fell in love with Naraku, but it turned out not to be the case. She reincarnated over and over again for him. Although Naraku loved her too, I always feel uncomfortable. The meaning of a person's birth should never be entirely for another person (just a personal opinion). Compared with the heroine living just to love Naraku, I would rather see a girl who has her own hobbies and ideals. Loving Naraku is only a part of her life. Because of the response, this part gradually becomes the most important part. After thinking about it, I'll give it five stars. It's rare to see a Naraku fan who writes well these days. The most important thing is that there are no messy misunderstandings, and there is no bloody and mindless cruelty of some fangirls who overpower Naraku and make him hurt or even kill the heroine during the period of love. The writing is great and the description is also very delicate. The two people always love each other and are working hard for the future. It's good.

The author is great. Deep love for Naraku. I also like Naraku very much. I wonder if Naraku is too boring? I have been bored alone for 50 years. Then it felt like there was nothing fun anymore. Suddenly InuYasha appeared again. Then I found the meaning of living. Okay, I can't understand it. I don't really like Inuyasha. When I was little, I watched this cartoon and loved the main character group. I stopped liking it when I grew up.

I still have a few chapters left to finish the extra chapter. I will wait until I find time to finish it and improve my reading rate. But I have to say that the writing style is not critical. The story is more about the two protagonists. The storyline of the protagonist group is not too elaborate, but it is not a big problem. Mainly because Naraku is very considerate! ! ! It's good to watch, but there's always a feeling that it's too short and the ending is almost... No matter, give it a good review! [Like] After reading the book and looking at the author's homepage, I discovered that the previous book on Fengyue and Naraku was also written by a teacher? ! High yield, I cried to death. Last year's rice was too cold and I only had it this year [crying][crying][crying]

Who knows? I cried to death. I haven't encountered such a beautiful Inuyasha Naraku fanfic for a long time. Although I was a little confused in the middle, I understood it after reading it a few times. I really love it.

Personally I quite like it

The writing is very good and the characters are not broken.

It's really good, the character image is maintained [Blowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss]

It's very beautiful. I didn't give it five stars because the intertwining of dreams and reality seems very messy at the end, but overall it's pretty good [like]

Nice article

Looks good [like], but a little bit cruel