Street Test: I Pretended to Be a Ghost and Scared the Black Impermanence into Stopping

There's nothing wrong with anything else. As long as the girl is removed, someone will definitely watch it, otherwise most people won't like it.

I've read it back and forth several times, and I think it's okay at the beginning. The mysterious and powerful feeling that the protagonist brings to the reader is still very strong [eating melon] but then it's a bit laggy. The character feels weak for no reason, and the partner I chose is also very lagging [laughing] (It feels a bit artificial, if you still want this character, it will be much better if you try to make it stronger [thinking]) All in all, it's still good, although the heroine is a failure. I look forward to a big recovery of the plot after the update [currently in progress] (The above personal opinion, you are right)

The writing is okay, but it would be better if the heroine was deleted.

I agree with the inclusion of a female protagonist in this book, because the heroine's appearance is not particularly abrupt, and her character is not very annoying. Anyway, I don't think it will work. Other plot aspects are also okay, although I don't know why the score is so low. Maybe it's because the emotional line is not well described, but I think his emotional line is actually not too obvious. It's much harder to write than some novels that don't know how to write emotional lines, and the writing is very obvious, and the emotional turning point is not written out.

E... How should I put it, not bad (personally)? The character of the main protagonist is a bit funny and loose. I don't know if the author will change it in the future, but even if he changes it, it won't help. The first impression is very important (unless Hei Wuchang kills the protagonist and turns him into a black man [laughing]). Of course, if you forget the previous settings in the later stage, you can continue reading [take a closer look] Come on, author! I'll take my leave now and see you later! Suddenly I feel that the word "funny" is not suitable [face covering] I should use "frivolous"

I read it all in one sitting. Although it has some flaws, this book is still worth pursuing. I would like to make a small suggestion. Can the author introduce the realm of ghosts and the realm of monasticism in detail? This will make the reading experience better. The writing is good now, I hope it won't collapse later. [How did the underworld collapse? Was it because of the war in the Three Realms that all the gods and Buddhas disappeared? Or is it because he wants to protect the Three Realms and goes to fight on the battlefield of all races? ] Looking forward to [eating melon]

I bet this book will be a hit [shy]

When the book becomes popular, I will be an old fan. Welcome, I am not [shy], it is very good, but it is a bit lacking.

The author is going to update quickly. I have found a lot of novels about black and white and impermanence, but they are not very good. I finally found this novel, but it has not been updated until now [crying]

It's pretty good, although there are some parts I don't like, but overall it's pretty good, so the author will update soon.