From Early Summer to Late Winter

After browsing this work, I was surprised that it was written by a girl under 13 years old. As far as literary works are concerned, there are distinct characters and a typical storyline. It is a story that takes place on campus. The story is very vivid, true and believable, and fully demonstrates one aspect of campus life. The language is also relatively refined, and it also reflects the literary characteristics that literary works come from life and are higher than life. It can be said to be a good work on campus life! Literature is human studies. I hope the author will put more effort into characterization, especially the protagonist, who should have typical character traits. For example: the more profound you write about his character and hobbies; if the character's personality characteristics are distinct, your work will be successful. There should be more psychological description of the characters. This is a feature that must be broken through when writing novels. All environments and languages ​​must be written around the characters, so as to better bring out the typical characteristics of the characters. Beginner writers should strengthen their language practice. The language should also conform to the characteristics of the characters. Literary language should be a natural expression of the characteristics of the characters. In addition, more pen and ink can be used to describe the environment, which can highlight the character's characteristics. Try to write serious dramas. Writing tragedies is not suitable for authors who are too young. They should be positive and uplifting. This kind of mental state can show people a beautiful life! …