Pokemon: My Life Suddenly Became Brighter

It's rare to see an article that is thoughtful and not clumsy. Cultivation of Elves is also written very well, but almost no one writes about gas bombs.

The civilian stream has a good idea, but the author acts like he has never played the game, and does not know some basic knowledge. Poison-type elves are poisoned, and he thinks that the farmer's three punches are high in damage (with the bonus of this type, and the kicks are significantly more powerful). The farmer's three punches are about the same to fight Hercules, and the fire fist and the ice fist are used to fight Charmander and mosquito tadpoles. You are the half-brother of the little mentally retarded, a contemporary master of reverse attributes. It's a bit heavy-handed, and I really can't bear that the author doesn't even understand the basics.

I've finished reading it. It's a civilian novel. I really didn't expect it. However, some sentences don't read smoothly and look awkward. It would be nice if it could be smoother, huh. . You should also write less about smelling fragrances, you are still a teenager!

Author, Gyarados Can Fly

The writing is pretty good, whether it's combat descriptions or daily life descriptions. The most important thing is that the protagonist's elves are not just a bunch of quasi-gods like other tomato novels. The only shortcoming is that there are too few. Come on, there will be more.

It's already over 100 chapters, and I feel like the pace could be sped up a bit. I've stayed in a small city for so long, and there are so many years left in high school. I don't have to go out of my way to suppress the protagonist's level. I feel like I can give the protagonist a little trick.

The writing is very good. Depending on the content, I should be able to write more than 500 chapters. Don't stop.

The writing is quite good, but the progress of the elves is very slow. A powerful force has not evolved in dozens of chapters. The 38th level monster has not evolved yet at the end. If this progress is followed, I guess no one can become a king. This kind of progress is too slow and unreasonable.

The protagonist's school placed third in a national competition? The previous article also forced away resources. Is it really reasonable for this small place to be ranked third in the country?

No more writing?