Transmigrating into Jingfeng with a Second Personality

I just read the first copy. It's very good and the plot is OK. I'm also a loyal reader of Jingfeng, so I'll tell you straight away. Liu Yibo's Harvest in Siren Town is amazing (I hope you can learn some more routines). It could use more emotional colors and beautiful words, and there are many funny elements. However, this is a horror and high-intelligence game that has been banned. To highlight the characteristics of horror and IQ, there can be fewer C words. The plot develops a bit too fast, so don't guess the whole thing. At the beginning, you borrowed words from the audience and said that this copy was difficult, so it should be more difficult! You can compare it with Siren Town (you've seen it, so you'll understand). You need to give some hints before guessing, and then verify and push the plot. That's all I've discovered so far. I hope you get better and better. I'll tell you if there are any questions later. Come on!

Why did you stop updating the author? Be careful about losing your loved one and becoming a pauper in the next life. Come back soon, author. There are too few surprises on Tomato. You are the only one who is not bad. Where are you, the author? Come back soon w(ﾟДﾟ)w

It looks good. The author's writing is very vivid, and the style is also very obvious. It is very good-looking. I recommend it (but how fast is the update... You will know it by yourself. I will update it slowly for these mines)

Author, have you forgotten both Bai Liu and Mu Sicheng? ? ? ? ?

Can the author update? It's been 9 months for me, almost a year, and you haven't updated. Although you, the author, are in school, you should also have holidays when you go to school. Why can't you update it during the holidays? You can even update it on the weekend. Author, please update as soon as possible. You haven't been updating for more than a year. What if it is removed from the shelves by Tomato? Many people really want to see your updates.

Come on, author, the writing is very good. Are you really not considering updating on May Day? I have almost finished reading these 30 chapters.

Ah, the protagonist is so cute, the book is so cute, and the author is so cute.

It's very beautiful, but there are too few updates. Can it be faster?

Author, author I love you like a mouse loves rice٩(๛ ˘ ³˘)۶❤[adoration][adoration]

Update soon! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Do fanfics have emotional lines? For example, Shuangxi