Make a Fortune and Raise a Top Scholar

These five words are written to inspire the author, and I hope the author can continue writing! But I hope the names can be clarified in the future. Mothers like Brother Shan should not be called Sister-in-law Xu. Sister-in-law and brother are of the same generation! Also, you are called aunt before you get married, and you are still called aunt after you are married. You will not call auntie sister-in-law just because you are married. Auntie and sister-in-law are not of the same generation! It's not like you change your name to uncle or aunt after you get married, and besides, uncle, aunt, and parents are also of the same generation! (I really tried my best, but I just want to complain once I see it. It affects the reading experience too much, but the author writes, five stars, I hope the author gets better and better!)

Every chapter I write introduces how to make a dish. I feel hungry when I see it [eating melon]

The first half of "Sending Hearts" written by Five Stars starts from the time traveler, and I feel that the plot goes too far. On the contrary, it would be better if the tone of the whole text was duller. There are indeed some ups and downs in the later plot of the plot, but it doesn't quite fit into the plot, so I felt confused while watching it [heart-wrenching]. But the writing is good and the protagonist's character is vivid~ It's just my subjective opinion, so cheers~

The story is pretty good. I hope the relationship between the two of them is a little more pure and there won't be so many people who want to destroy it. I like to be a couple for the rest of my life, even if it's fake.

Overall it's pretty good to watch, but I was a little confused and couldn't understand some of the plot. So what's going on with the queen? And why did the time traveler come and what happened when he left＼(◎o◎)／! Can anyone help answer this question? Curious

"A cappella" is really hard to swallow [I'm about to cry] and I'm really sorry that the Seventh Prince is not with General Qiu, but the Seventh Prince should have a good home in the end. Finally, Chu An and Moran Jiangjiang Niangnian, I have been waiting for a long time [Grieved]

This book is very well written, but the name "brother" is too feminine. In fact, you can distinguish the names of women and "brother", otherwise it will be a bit unclear whether it is a woman or a brother. I hope the author will take a closer look and don't think I have too many things to do. [Shy][shy][send heart][send heart]

I thought it was going to be over [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying]

Not bad, but the ending was not handled well

The plot jumps very quickly later on, and I feel like some things were rushed to the end without being explained clearly, but I still like the subject matter.