The Ordinary Heroine: I Became Megumi Kato's Desk Mate

Such a good book, five stars, must be five stars First there are saints and then there is heaven. I am as beautiful as a fairy in a painting. Others are competing for beauty, but I am free, and passers-by are making waves in the world. The saintly and virtuous heart collects my benefits, and my heart is soft and thoughtful. It doesn't matter if you are obsessed with saints, just because of Kato's single character Hui. The white hat of Yingpo touches the heartstrings, and I fall in love with Hui all his life! A saint is like an immortal who benefits from the heavens, and it is hard to break his heart when he sees him in this mortal world.

The first five-star review must be yours🌝🌝

This book is good for fans of the passerby heroine. The disadvantage is that some of the plots are borrowed from the original work [Face Covering], but the new author can also understand it. The characters in it are also consistent, and it is also paving the way for the senior sister and the golden retriever loser to leave Lunya, unlike other books. He is like a fan who directly disregards the previous friendship and breaks up with Lunya. The plot is quite reasonable. It depends on how to deal with the problem of the emotional line and the problem of Lunya breaking up with the protagonist group. Come on, author, take your time. I believe you will write the passerby heroine in your mind! [Please update] A few final suggestions: 1. With Kato Megumi, the relationship may not be confirmed so quickly, but if we should send candy or something, I like to watch it [laughing] 2. An Yilun also tried his best to get him out of the protagonist group as soon as possible. After all, it affects the mood of reading. Let the protagonist group be formed as soon as possible, and deal with An Yilun well. Don't let him come back later to disgust the protagonist. It is best not to have that kind of plot, it is very poisonous. The rest of the plot can only be written about Kato Eboshi and career development. 3. The first time a new author writes a novel, it should not be long, so the length should be considered. The current pace is actually okay, but it may become more and more sloppy as the writing progresses, so the plot should be refined. 4. The emotional line between the senior sister and Ying Lili needs to be very careful. Nowadays, readers are always talking about it. Whenever the protagonist does something wrong, they will madly complain. If you keep dragging the emotional line between the protagonist and them, they will be called a scumbag or something. People No, it's okay, but now I feel that I'm still far away from senior sister and Eirili falling in love with the protagonist. Don't worry about this. Just think about how to deal with it in advance. By the way, don't make it too abrupt for senior sister and Eirili to like the protagonist. There must be some key plot foreshadowing. Ps: Author, please go to bed early. Don't go to bed early every morning. Staying up late is not good. If you are stuck, just take care of your mental state first. Don't worry, I will wait for your update. Come on^0^~

The fanfic of Megumi Kato, the single female protagonist, is worth recommending! Most of the fanfics I have read before gradually turned into a harem. As Megumi is a very possessive heroine, I think Kato Megumi changed after she opened a harem. Strongly recommend the author~~[Love]

To be honest, I am extremely happy to find another book with Hui featuring many villains and a single heroine. I have already decided on this book. Even the author An Yilun and Yinglili were together when they were young. Didn't Yinglili abandon An Yilun? Alas, never mind, in short, your book is for Hui and I support you. I recommend it, after all, the author also needs motivation. If you want the horse to run, you have to give the horse grass. Come on, author, ten updates a day! !

A rare fan of a passerby heroine, come on, the author

Not bad, but the system certification is a bit sloppy. In addition, the plot of the defeated dog can be ended quickly, so I will talk about it this morning. Senior sister is fine now. Hui and the protagonist can write more about daily life. See you later

The study time is increasing, and the aggression is also increasing. How should I put it, it's a mixed bag of good and bad, a bit toxic (I can read it), and there are also some things that make me shine. For example, when the protagonist is planning to level up to level 2 to 3 games, he behaves irrationally due to jealousy and emotional influence. It's good to realize his mistakes later (although in the end) Continued: (Although the inspiration on the Sakura Ramp at the end made me feel a little uncomfortable, it was a double standard, but not a complete double standard) Overall, that part is still okay, come on, author

Hey, I saw it today, finished it today, ah, damn it! Come on, author, come on, author, update! Uh-huh, come on! [Laughs][laughs]

As someone who has read the original work three times, I make the following comments: First of all, this book is a good choice for those who like passerby heroines. As one of the rare novels with a passerby heroine as the main plot and with many scenes, I recommend that those who like it read it. Secondly, the image of An Yilunye in this book has been changed to some extent. He is more possessive (in a derogatory sense), neurotic (although he is still the same originally), and self-centered (the same as in the original work). In short, his character is worse, so he is easy to poach. Then, Megumi is really cute [pouts] Finally, I would like to make some suggestions: 1. The plot connection should be smoother. For example, the collapse of the protagonist Hokkaido is quite abrupt and feels like there is no foreshadowing. 2. The author can try to get rid of the constraints of the original plot. It is best not to let Midoriya's experience become the protagonist's experience and create memories that are unique to the protagonist and Megumi. Overall, this book is pretty good. I give it five stars to support it. I hope the author will work harder [please give me more updates]