Anime Crossover: The Journey Home

Following the plot line is a very safe way, for readers who have never read Chunwu, but I personally think that adding some of your own thoughts and creativity can give people a brighter feeling. When writing, it is also recommended to write in paragraphs such as "language + action + psychology", which can better shape the character and make the character come alive, and also give readers a sense of the picture. If it is just the whole dialogue, it will be very tiring to read and you will not know who is talking to whom. The above is my humble opinion.

It's good to watch. I want to see The King of Dead Hair.

To be honest, this novel is very well written. Well, it's a bit boring and a bit too routine! Cough... But there are still some small details that haven't been sorted out. For example, when I arrived at the location, it was not very clear, and it looked a bit messy when I read it. Well, then there were no other problems for the time being, cough... If I see other problems later, I will revise the review again.

Except for the writing style and frequency of updates that need to be improved, the content is quite in line with my taste. Come on, old man.

The writing is very good. If there is room for improvement, it would be the dialogue between the characters. Sometimes I am not sure who is speaking.

Oh yeah, knives, I love knives the most

Well written. The author has more knives.

I just want to ask if the hole will be backfilled later? [What]

Very nice. Come on.

What is the next world? Let's write about the main world.