Steampunk: I Own an Ironclad City

Yes, the plot is smooth and orderly, making people feel good while watching it. Come on, please read more soon. Don't stop, keep writing. If you write well, more and more people will like this book. Don't give up.

It's not easy to write a book, so it's a five-star review. The demining is completed. It is a very interesting book with a grand world view and good details including settings. Overall, I can't find any major faults, but the rhythm control is not very good, and there is too much foreshadowing in the early stage, which makes it difficult to retain people. (The little Madonna with pig's feet, her character is not very lovable, I don't know if it will change in the future) This type of book is generally more exciting the further it goes, if you have the patience you can give it a try, and if you like it, you might as well support the new book and give it a thumbs up. Let me add that this book should be entered with caution. According to what book friends added, it has collapsed. If the expired writing method from ten years ago is used now and is used by others, will it not cause diarrhea? (Proving once again that all slow-moving people are just doing business)

It looks good, but I hope it has more combat and development, and less commercial things. The neighbor collects grain and I collect guns, and the neighbor just plays the role of granary.

The world view and various settings are quite interesting, but you can take a look at the other ones if you have nothing to do. There's nothing wrong with the protagonist's character overall, but it's a bit toxic in certain plots. Overall it's watchable, but it's mid-level and the world view is pretty interesting. Alas, the 200 pictures in this book have always been in the early stage of novices and are still adapting to the world. They have only been in a town for more than 200 pictures. In the future, one picture will completely change the concept of the protagonist. Before that, he has been subconsciously using the rules of the peaceful world in his previous life until someone woke him up. This is not a big problem. The concept he has accepted since childhood is not that you can overthrow the other party if you want to. This varies from person to person.

This is a very interesting book, with a tight pace and every step of the story paving the way for subsequent growth. The progress of the protagonist is well-founded, but I don't know why it suddenly stopped writing.

An old bookworm who has been pursuing this book for so long certainly has something unique about it! The male protagonist, from zero to something, to gradually becoming stronger! The process is wonderful and the plot is compact, worth collecting! The follow-up content may be even more exciting!

The writing is quite good, the plot is interesting, the subject matter is good, and the imagination is great. There are some problems with the character setting, and some plots are indeed a bit poisonous. But I am also a book writer myself, so I am not as good as you. Come on!

The content is quite good. It's a good article about food and grass. It's a pity that the end has been cut off.

There is nothing wrong with the details. Everyone has their own opinions on the character of the protagonist. The work is relatively realistic, not a brainless novel type. If you have the patience, you can read it. There are no surprises. The plot is smooth and the author has good skills. Most of the negative reviews are complaining about the character. It depends on your personal opinion. You can try it.

The content and depth exceed 95% of the Tomato novels I have seen. In particular, the content is rich and there is no boring and monotonous fighting and killing. The whole book gives people the feeling that it really depicts a different world with flesh and blood. Five points of praise! Super exciting!