Villain: Sorry About This, System Girl

I'm shameless enough to give myself five stars 😳 All I can say is that the preceding setup was for safety [think about it carefully]. And this book will absolutely never be cuckolded. I swear on my life, the warrior of pure love is invincible!!!

I think the protagonist's personality could be developed further. Don't fawn over him, and don't use what you consider normal human affection to shape the characters in the novel. Online novels aren't necessarily wish-fulfillment stories, but they are definitely detached from reality.

Sure, the villain's actions were quick and efficient, and the system baby was adorable. Most importantly, I felt the author's style was a perfect match for mine, especially the part where the cheat codes were enabled; I insisted on visiting the site immediately! 😳😳😳

I'm deducting one star because of Fan Shuishui. If she were a villain, it would be acceptable, but randomly possessing people is quite harmful to innocents, especially since she's one of their own. She kills them after using them, even though there's no real grudge. It's hard to guarantee she won't turn on her own people for personal gain in the future. She's even worse than Ye Tian.

It's not bad, though the pacing is a bit fast. Two chapters are still under review, but based on the plot development, it should be very exciting. The author seems to have forgotten to explain the ending; Yang Ying's childhood sweetheart wasn't addressed, and it wasn't clear whether Yang Ying's cousin, Han Yingran, ended up with her.

Okay, very good, excellent! The villain got beaten up the very first time he met the chosen one! I can't be the only one falling into this trap!

Short and concise, it's rare to find a system novel ending with a large family of children; most of them feature men who have had their ligations removed. This one actually has a whole bunch of kids, which is quite rare. Finally, something normal! 👍👍👍👍

It's good, the pace is fast, but it gets a little twisted towards the end, and the pacing is too quick. The later acquisition of women feels a bit inexplicable, and aside from the baby, the other women have very little screen time. Overall, though, it's good; the protagonist still has some humanity, unlike others who just use women as tools for gratification. This one doesn't engage in any ambiguous relationships, so I highly recommend it.

The book is quite good. The fight scenes and descriptions of strength are minimal and fresh, without unnecessary dialogue or padding. The word count is reasonable and I personally like it. There are also quite a few female leads. However, the ending feels a bit rushed, leaving me wanting more. Overall, it's a great book, I'd give it a perfect score. Author, keep up the good work and bring us more great works in the future!

That car was going incredibly fast; I didn't even notice when the tire marks appeared on my face 🤦