Abnormal Survival: Becoming a Mysterious Girl

The writing is very steady, not like a new writer [laughing evilly] Definitely not a new writer, the writing style is so impressive

There are two main story lines and multiple branch lines composed of multiple characters, and the world view is grand. Moreover, the author is very good at setting up suspense. He can make good use of techniques to make readers feel an urgent emotion. To a certain extent, the readers can become anxious kings [laughing evilly] and follow the plot in a highly focused state. The most important thing is that the author can also set up multiple suspenses at the same time to achieve the feeling of lifting the taste (I call it merged suspense), which can keep the readers in a state of urgency for the ending, so that the readers have no time to take into account some plot and setting problems [laughing], making the overall rhythm very smooth and capable, and the viewing experience is excellent [full] emmm...[Laughing evilly]

This is another good book. The author's writing is good, but it is recommended to lower the score to about 8.0~8.5. I am afraid that the book will disappear if the score is high. I have seen several books disappear like this. Finally, cheers to the author! (Hope it won't end badly)

It's super fun to watch. The character portrayal is very popular with me, and the name is great, but why does Qin Yue's image look like a lolita in my mind... (I declare that I am not a lolita fan [awkward laugh]). I like it very much. I hope I don't become a eunuch [eating melon]

It is a very good book with high quality. It is refreshing for me, a person who has been tortured by Liu Shui literature. The plot and writing are excellent, especially the story of Leiden, which really moved me. It uses delicate writing to describe the painful struggles of the only two races left in the world, and William, the focus of which, is a pioneer of that era. The depth of his description is very impressive and regrettable. One person alone can write a true portrayal of the people who struggled for survival in that era. In subsequent plots, the protagonist repeatedly mentioned him and Layton, and sometimes even used the image of William in mimicry. This shows how much Layton's experience has affected the protagonist, because the resurrected protagonist is just a monster with memories of his life before death, living just to live. It can be seen that Layton's experience has greatly affected the protagonist's view of good and evil: "Friends should help each other." Although the protagonist always emphasizes that help is based on his own safety, I believe that the protagonist will subtly improve his own blanks. This book is absolutely excellent on Tomato. Don't miss it when passing by.

The author's writing style is very good, the description is spot-on, and the protagonist's character is rational and very appealing to me. He dares to use two lines to develop and the writing does not feel inconsistent. I have only seen this kind of book on Tomato in one palm. Is this absolute confidence in his own strength? Not only does he have gimmicks to attract readers, but there is also a reasonable plot development that makes readers want to continue reading. I have not seen many books of such high quality on Tomato in the past few months. Some places have no beginning or end, such as Chapter 40. I can understand the author's desire not to have a plain narrative, but this is not very friendly to some readers. After all, I read this book mostly to relieve stress (attracted by the title). The lack of scene dialogue + line-changing description is really a bit confusing. I only realized that the line-changing was done after reading the dialogue.

It's so beautiful, I look forward to the future plot development [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration] The beautiful girl of the Gram family is the best!!!

At first glance, I thought it was a worldview similar to that of the Lord of Mysteries. After reading it, I realized that the author's worldview creation has something new of his own, and not only that. There are no loopholes in the setting so far, and it can be considered mature. The plot development has a comfortable pace and the characters are three-dimensional. The only criticism at the moment is There is no clear prompt for the transition, and the narrative feels a bit confusing. I personally hope that the author can add a dotted line to indicate the transition or clarify the location after the transition to tell the readers. However, after getting used to the author's narrative method, I really became more and more obsessed with it. I really love this book. The setting and world view are great.

The book is still very good. There may be some minor problems in some details, but after all, it is a seedling, so we can't force it too much. I hope the author can write better and better in the future.

This treasure of more than 600,000 words was discovered only recently... This is a book that I like very much. The protagonist is so exciting to me. It is unexpectedly boring in a world of weird despair and blind fish eating. The author's writing is very good, the characters are well-drawn, and the atmosphere of Leiden is well rendered. William's death really shocked me. Thank you (fuck you [smile]), author. This book cannot be read at a glance, and you must read it slowly, otherwise you will easily become confused. With such straightforward descriptions, it's a wonder this book has survived to this day. Maybe the subject matter is niche and few people read it, but this is probably the reason why this book is still alive... It's beautiful, please update more from the author