Naruto: the Beginning Kaleidoscope Obito

I think it's okay, but I just don't post more [awkward laughter] this emoticon. The author's response rate is very high [send heart], it's one of the best in Tomato. Personal opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it, it's okay to read, unlike some that either end with dozens of chapters or break off after one or two hundred chapters, so I'm optimistic about [send heart], harem story, if you don't like it, don't click it, other things are okay, not considered a break [sneaky laugh] Some emotional scenes can't be rewritten.

It's pretty good, but I hope the author adds less things that don't belong to Naruto. The update speed is a bit slow. Other authors update three chapters in two days [please update]

If nothing else, I just want to ask Obito where his grandma went?

I just like brainless cool articles

To be honest, it was quite interesting, but I stopped watching after I saw Sasuke became a poor cook and Naruto became a genius and arrogant (I don't know what Naruto will become later)

[Smile] [Smile] It's really very good-looking. I like Obito's character very much [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration]

Damn, it must be praised, Tsunade won it with just a dozen pictures

Look at the duration. Overall, it's pretty good. The article has a novel idea, the subject matter is original, the paragraphs are clear, the plot is weird, ups and downs, and the main line is clear, but it still needs work. The characters are vividly drawn and the personalities are good. Personally, I quite enjoyed this book.

The author must have a harem

I read it a long time ago but stopped halfway through and haven't seen much since then. But Tsunade has a child, so this is better. Many fanfics don't have children. This one is well written, but I don't know why it has such a low rating.

Okay, okay, Tomato Naruto is a novice, this is okay

I finished reading it after skipping chapters. How can I put it, it's okay, and it can be read in Shuhuang. Okay, that's it. Writing a book is not easy, five stars encourage you! Many female literary yyds! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

It's a very good book. I hope others won't deliberately lower the evaluation.

If the needle doesn't poke, my wife is a steel hand, hehe.

I personally like Obito and Donggo in it very much

Not bad, not bad. It's what I want, but I don't know if I'll accept it later [laughing evilly]

It's very good-looking, but it's too boring to update. Come on, author, try to update twice a day. I've watched it all, I watch it every day

Very good, as long as Hinata and Naruto's life trajectory is inconsistent with the original work, it is basically impossible to be together. And Jiraiya and Naruto are really not worthy of Tsunade and Hinata The male protagonist is Obito. . Always makes me act. .

It is recommended to skip Chapter 26 and Chapter 27. If you read these two chapters, it will definitely be very annoying. I don't think there is any problem with the rest. It's a good harem story.

Author, I want the cover [Chigua][Chigua]

This is one of the few books I've ever read to the end and added to my bookshelf. Great

Feeling more comfortable

This is not the bus to kindergarten [crying]

It's okay, the story has a clear context and the characters have their own personalities, but it doesn't follow the original work.

Yossi, the author has a great conscience, and his driving is super stable [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]

It's a very good book. The storyline is very novel. It's not like other cookie-cutter plots. You'll die in Konoha forever. What's the point of being loyal to Konoha when it's so dark?

Good news, worth seeing

Why no rating I've withdrawn it. I really can't understand Chapter 26. This is a cool article.

It would be nice if the heroine is not Lin. At least there is no need to go dark.

What I wrote in the front is indeed a bit like a novice, but what I wrote in the back is really good.