Genshin Impact: Becoming the Leader of Liyue

It's well written. There are too few serious male protagonists. I don't know where those losers got the ambition to have a harem every day.

The rating does not match the article. This book can beat most Genshin Impact fanfics. Its IQ is online and its logic is correct. The protagonist is also an ordinary person, but he got a skill from a god after traveling through time. Generally speaking: he likes to punish evil and promote good, but he is very stubborn in doing things, and his IQ drops slightly when asked by reporters. The main plot of the relationship with Ning Guang is very good, at least the IQ is online, but the article in this book in Qun Yu Pavilion will make Ning Guang very unsatisfactory, threatening the protagonist (although this is correct, but it will not meet the eyes of most people), and later Ning Guang opens his heart to the protagonist. Overall, there is no problem, and there is no need to complain about this, right? I think Yelan is the best portrayed in the article. The worst thing to say is Chongyun Xingqiu and Yun Jin at the beginning of the article. It's hard to say because Yun Jin's main plot has not ended. It may be explained later why the protagonist is invited to protect her and her real purpose. Xingqiu and Chongyun are completely to set off the development of the protagonist, and the further development of the plot seems a bit stiff. There is no record of the two characters liking to fight in the original plot, so it is almost impossible to kick the guild. Xingqiu himself said that he fought to punish evil and promote good, but Chongyun's opponent was a monster, so this section seemed stiff. Overall, I like this book very much. It is one of the few Genshin Impact fanfics on Tomato that has accurate IQ online descriptions. I hope the author will continue to work hard! Although I have only read a few hundred thousand words, I feel that this book will definitely carry forward!

The quality is good~ I'm optimistic about you, my cutie~

I have only read more than 30 chapters, so I will only comment on the first part. I don't know what will happen next, but some of the previous plots are suspected of being forcibly sublimated. The obviously very hot plot is written in an awkward way. At least it seems awkward to me. It is not natural at all. However, the plot concept is one of the better ones among all the Genshin Impact fanfics I have read. Personal opinion, the author is greatly encouraged [Like][Like][Like]

I really like this style. I like the author's writing style. The content is also what I want, but I feel that the recipient of this book is not very clear. But this can be regarded as a feature. If I were to rate it, I would give it an 8.8.

Although I can't stand the harem, the author's martial arts scenes are very delicate. Take one look at spitting blood, look at spitting blood, just keep looking at it like this

The writing is very good, the psychological details and direction of the protagonist, the vivid descriptions of fighting the protagonist, the characters are delicate, and the character traits are really one of the few "good" in the fanfiction! , The protagonist's system is vulgar, but his ability is not vulgar. Although it is a national martial art, it has been carefully revised by the author himself, and the article has its own characteristics. Forget about the author, please hurry up and do your homework. [Blow a kiss]

The writing is really good, the plot transitions are crisp and not greasy, and the writing is very good. Although the rating is low, it will gradually improve. It would be better if there is no heroine. I hope it is not a stallion. It is difficult to accept a single heroine in this type of novel.

Very nice! Come on, author! It would be fine as long as there is no prison. [Eat melon][eat melon][eat melon][laugh][laugh][laugh]

After reading the book reviews, there are encouragements and suggestions, and there are also some "suggestions" that I don't know if they are suggestions, but I am still on the side of encouraging the author. This book is much better than other fanfics, this is my feeling now after reading it. The portrayal of the original characters is still very good. It does not deviate from the original work, and it also makes people feel refreshed when they see this character. The plot has daily routines and climaxes, which really appealed to my taste. I believe many people are the same as me. As for suggestions, I don't have any. After all, I don't know how to write articles. I just hope the author can work harder! Don't collapse later! Don't suddenly stop updating and disappear! Although I know that it is very hard for the author to update the article, as a reader, I definitely hope that such excellent works can be maintained. Therefore, I have never dared to keep books, because I was afraid that I would find nothing if I kept them... I believe that good works will not be buried, the author should do his best!