Disciple Has a System, Master, I Will Become Invincible

Holy book! The third young master of the Tang family shed tears after reading it, and Tiancan Tudou sighed after reading it. This must be one of the four great masterpieces, and it is definitely the number one sacred book in the 21st century. Shengxu is almost lacking in literary talent in front of it! Doubo almost has no connotation in front of it! Zhu Xian almost felt emotional in front of it! Zhe Tian can almost imagine it in front of it! Buddha almost made a plan in front of it! A once-in-a-century classic of online novels! The greatest literary work of the 21st century! Luo Guanzhong, Shi Naian, Wu Cheng'en, Cao Xueqin, Kong Mo, Lao Zhuang, Li Bai, Du Fu, San Su, Xin Qiji, Emperor Qin, Emperor Han, Wu Tang, ancestors of the Song Dynasty, Genghis Khan, Sakyamuni, Plato, Copernia, Aristotle, all said it was good after reading it! The author's book is really well written. The writing style is fluent and the rhetoric is appropriate. It is deeply rooted in the legacy of the Wei and Jin dynasties, and it also carries forward the style of the Tang and Song Dynasties to the core. I can read this book by the author in my lifetime. It is really my blessing in three lifetimes. After reading this book by the author, I actually felt an indescribable feeling of sadness. If I can never read such a good novel in the future, what should I do? So what should I do? It wasn't until I put the author's book on my bookshelf without hesitation that the excitement in my heart gradually calmed down. But I immediately thought about such a good novel. If others can't read it, wouldn't it be a waste of the author's efforts? After a painful ideological struggle, I finally made up my mind to live in the small self and dedicate myself to the greater self. I want to dedicate this book review to the world for reading, and I want to keep reading this novel. Go up, go up! Until everyone sees it! As I walk between heaven and earth, with the sun blazing and the moon shining brightly in the sky, I have to ask, is this novel enough to read and not enough? When I walk on the rivers and lakes, the rivers are full and the rivers are rolling, I have to ask me, is this novel enjoyable enough? "Not enough!" When I walk on the top of the mountains, among the beautiful buildings and jade buildings, and the immortals in the sea of ​​clouds, I have to ask, is this novel updated fast enough? Not enough! Far from enough! Not enough chapters, not enough speed content! Not even enough!

It looks very relaxed, the sect is very harmonious, and the protagonist is not ungrateful and wants to change the map, but the protagonist's level is improved too slowly, and he is nothing if he does not rely on the system. The ancestor of the sect dug a little deep into the pit, and he was looking forward to the moment when the sect revealed its full strength.

It's quite good-looking, I hope it will continue. Also, there shouldn't be a female protagonist.

It's extremely interesting to read Chapter 8. I'm a slow reader and also read the comments. This book is dedicated to Ai Kun. Don't let little black people enter, otherwise you will eat the eggs laid by my brother [laughter]. The comments are more interesting than the book. There are no flaws yet. I recommend watching [laughter]

Wuhu! It looks comfortable to fly. I wish the author is full of inspiration and will update it soon! You are the one who wants to be the King of Rolls!

Not a family, not a sect. The sixth peak among the top five ranked among the five sects is really extraordinary. The sect is harmonious and well versed in the ancestral teachings. In the introduction, it seems that it only takes the disciples to take off, but in fact the whole group soars. There are advances and retreats, the details are appropriate, and the description of each disciple is also very vivid, each with its own merits. It also uses the system combination to the extreme. It integrates the strengths of hundreds of schools of thought to make up for its own shortcomings. The subject matter is very distinctive, novel, and reasonable. There are a lot of funny jokes in the article, the article is light-hearted and pleasant, and it balances the leisure growth and monster-fighting plot. I hope the author will continue to work hard in the future and get better and better!

It can be said that the writing style is good, the introduction is a real introduction, there is no exaggeration, or the introduction is better than the content itself, the article is refreshing, there are no subtle points, and other things cannot be seen, after all, there are relatively few chapters.

It's a very good novel. There is no lack of perception after reading it. The author's writing of Long Aotian is grand, generous, and not pretentious. There are no serious loopholes in the plot or digging holes. I support it very much. The writing is not novice, there are no repetitive behaviors, and the structure is clear. Come on author, I love it.

This book is well written. It is a serious apprenticeship, not a harem.

Yes, it has its own style. I originally wanted to give it four stars, but seeing that the author is an Aikun, I gave it five stars!

It's really good-looking and suits my taste. I hope that the protagonist will recruit more apprentices later on and not have a female protagonist. If there is a female protagonist, it won't look good!

The content is very good, very ups and downs, and it is more in line with my aesthetic, and the writing is also very good, and the writing style is relatively good, but the plot may be too long, that's me, and I have always wanted to see the protagonist Shizun, our main protagonist, take action, but the number of times he takes action is really high. Less, and then he keeps holding on, and doesn't always show his strength. He has strength, and I think he can still show it. I hope the author can work harder and don't have to hold on to everything, not even daring to look back. I think this is really unnecessary, right? When the protagonist can be shown, it is better to show it, don't hold back all the time, and then I like the plot very much, with ups and downs, and it is also very suitable for my heart. Then some character characteristics such as these holy places, and these other various are all portrayed, very well, so that a person can clearly reflect that he is not invincible, but also has shortcomings, so this person will be more real. I think this article is generally very good, but it will be longer in setting the stage. In addition, the portrayal of the protagonist is not that good. Another point is that some things that should be shown are not shown in place. Another point is that the daily life of the protagonist is not reflected too much, but his disciples. In fact, the length of describing the younger brother and other sects will be longer than the protagonist himself. Then the popularity is not that complicated. Plus, it may be a relatively simple dispute, so it is not as complicated as the writing. The logic is not very strong, but it is also very good.

Just like the introduction, it looks good. But I would like to make some comments. After the author has finished writing, he will go back and read what he has written. There are many paragraphs where the words and sentence meanings are repeated, which makes it look a bit tiring. I hope the author can notice it, thank you.

This book is so beautiful, I highly recommend it! Laoliu Principles of Laoliu Sect If you can't beat them, just run and shake them. The surface strength of the sect may only be 0.02 Read novels for leisure and entertainment, Ness!

The early stage is very interesting, the writing style is relaxed, the six old sects are happy and help each other, I like this atmosphere very much, and each disciple has his own characteristics. However, I don't quite understand why in the later stages, some minor villains kept jumping around and did not go offline, such as Qin Jiuxiao and Liu Qingyan, they felt like they were forcibly extending their lives. Maybe it's because I rarely watch the protagonist lying flat. I feel that the protagonist rarely has his own opinion in the later stage. Compared with what many people call "the system dotes on the protagonist", it's more like the protagonist has become a "humanoid pendant" that implements the will of the system. But overall it's still very interesting and can be used as food [laughs]

Update quickly, one hundred chapters a day, hurry, hurry, hurry! ! ! I really want to give you one star. Why is it so slow? You have to improve the speed while ensuring quality. Why is the rating of this book so low? Is it because your updates are slow?

It seems to be very good so far, with a lot of ideas, and the author is very interesting about 5G surfing. It makes people unable to guess what they are going to do next, and it won't be like the old cliché of the insider, and the protagonist can be said to be relatively stubborn. Of course, the whole sect is very stubborn, and he will not rush forward with all his heart like in other novels knowing that there is danger. I like this novel very much and will keep reading it, and I highly recommend it. I really love this kind of rhythm especially.

It's really beautiful. I hope the author can write more and don't get stuck (ﾉД`)

I've caught up with the progress. It's one of the best novels I've ever read. The plot is gentle, the progress is reasonable, and the writing is light and humorous. It feels like the author has certain social experience. Personally, I feel that there are a few things that are a bit abrupt: killing the blood demon to obtain holy weapons and training resources is a bit abrupt compared to the previous situation where I only had experience; the protagonist saint's intermediate level of cultivation is a bit abrupt to break through the holy king in his sleep in order to shock Huangpi; and the toad, which is described in many words, has nothing in the sea tribe, which is also very abrupt. The novel is generally good, but there are some flaws in it. I hope the author can keep it up and not be like some novels that deliberately expand the plot for the sake of the plot, only to be unable to contain it later and cause the plot to collapse.

Angry, I'm so angry, I haven't seen enough, I haven't seen enough, foreigners think we look down on the update, 100 chapters, 100 pictures per person [angry][angry][angry][angry]

It feels okay after watching it for so long. It is very suitable for listening to books when you are bored, and the content is not too brain-burning. And it's also very cool. If you don't pursue the emotional richness of the characters, you can still watch it. There are not many plot repetitions, but most of them follow a process of meeting a strong person, defeating the strong person, and then meeting a strong person again. What makes people speechless is that this episode is particularly slow, so those who want to watch it should consider carefully. There is no female protagonist who is very satisfied. The male protagonist doesn't have those bad tastes either, and he is countless times better than other male characters in Tomato.

Come on! Come on! I particularly like this book. I downloaded Tomato just to read it. Because I had always read The Fall of the Tenth Death before and thought it was too slow to update, so I read it myself! Come on! Don't let me down! [Eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon] The content is great, keep it up! I am very much looking forward to the following plot, and I hope it can be updated faster [crying] [note]

In fact, it's not bad. If you like to watch movies without a female lead and no ambiguity, you can watch it. The main storyline is too slow, with more than 600 chapters yet to come out of the novice village, but I can keep reading. The only bad thing is that there are too many plots for the three cannon fodders. The protagonist and the protagonist's apprentice do not have as many plots as these three people, making it a bit tiring to read. Another thing is that this is a system-oriented article, but the system in this book is too superficial. As the protagonist, the system should not be mysterious and powerful. On the contrary, the male protagonist's parents are very powerful and mysterious. In short, I see that there is not much poisonous point. If you can read it, you can read it if you are a book lover or those who like to read movies without cp and ambiguity. Also, the male protagonist's female apprentice is quite cute and not ambiguous!

The author's writing is so good. There is no heroine or harem, and he concentrates on training his apprentices to be masters. I love it [blowing kisses]

At present, it seems that there is no female protagonist, and the male protagonist is only beautiful. The entire Wuxiang Sect is the sixth, and it is also a sect with more elders than disciples. The content is interesting. Each disciple of the protagonist has a distinct personality and each has its own characteristics. Recommend?

This book is okay. It's not as good as the review next door said. It's just a short story. The main character is too lazy and doesn't have any ideas of his own. It gives people the impression that he is a puppet of the system. Of course, it's okay to read it as a bookkeeper in his spare time. At least there's no character collapse (for example, I saw that woman can't walk) or anything like that.

To be honest, the sect is very harmonious and a bunch of old guys are quite nice to watch.

Nice! What a cool article! After accepting a disciple, the apprentice works hard to make the male protagonist profit, and the male protagonist's cultivation will increase every day [blowing kiss] The sect is all the sixth, and they are very united, and they are escorted by their ancestors wherever they go. They are also cute. The male protagonist's son brings a bunch of younger brothers to collect treasures for the male protagonist.

It's still OK, the problem is that update, it's a bit unusually slow, please author, there are 250 updates a day now, I am here to strictly supervise you [scroll][think][explore][explore][explore][explore][explore]

They are all so cute. The disciple's sign-in system and the idle system are all the master's part-time system. He goes out to buy goods from time to time. The rewards are generous and full. They are humorous and interesting. I just don't know if the owner of My Big Fruit Is Gone will doubt his life.