City Pokemon: The Champion’s Road

After reading these chapters, my face turned solemn. I lowered my head deeply, silently turned off my phone, got up, opened the refrigerator, took out a bottle of 1982 vintage Nongfu Spring water, held it tightly in my hand, and slowly walked to the window. The scenery outside was somewhat gloomy, just like my mood—heavy, very heavy. Gradually, a light rain began to fall from the gray sky outside.

The writing is very good, I just hope the female lead doesn't end up like Liu Mengyi.

You're a seasoned author now! You should understand what readers need...😏

Don't let the energy cubes appear in public (the whole team/Pokémon champion will be announced later). Try your best to collect Mega Evolutions, and try to get evolution materials yourself (for example, Gliscor needs Sharp Fangs to evolve). If you're being watched by two powerful figures, try to be more discreet.

I feel Liu Tiancai is the main character (personal opinion).

If you're going to write about unrequited love, you can't just write about unrequited love. You have to write about subconsciously searching for his silhouette in a crowd, about the panic when you accidentally make eye contact, about the remaining days of summer, about the pain of watching him love someone else while hiding in the crowd, about the regret of not being brave enough, about the desolation in your heart after ultimately missing out.

It's alright, but if you don't have a female lead, don't create a younger sister. There's so much interaction between them, and they're childhood sweethearts, but they're not even related. If you were to give her away, I'd give her a five-star rating on installment. Write less plot that drags the main character down—it's pointless. Focus more on battles and less on slice-of-life scenes. People read Pokémon stories for the battles; slice-of-life is really unnecessary.

It's good. The difference in strength between the supporting characters and the main characters might be a bit large, but it's still negligible. However, after reading the comments, am I the only one who thinks Liu Mengyi is normal? Isn't it just brother and sister, relatives teasing each other and joking around? Besides, they grew up together. I don't think it's anything bad, and they didn't do anything excessive. Personally, I think it's very normal.

Go go go! ^0^~😜 Those who said they didn't want to read about female leads ended up with 25,000 views, and I like stories with female leads.

It's alright. The beginning was a bit bland, and Liu Mengyi's character was too unforgiving, which dragged down the rating quite a bit. But if you persevere to the end, it's pretty good. Shiny Gliscor and Chinchilla are indeed excellent. When I first started playing Sword and Shield, the first thing I did was try to get a Shiny starter bird. They're both good-looking and strong. I hope the author can keep it up! 💕