Pokemon: A New World

It is the first time for a newcomer to write a book, so any suggestions from everyone will be adopted. The protagonist may be a little weaker in the early stage. I want to write the protagonist from 0 to gradually become stronger. I estimate that the word count for this novel will be several million words, and I will write it as long as a few people read it.

As a new writer, I think the writing is pretty good. It is very in line with the mentality of real people. It is not the kind of article that will blow up the world immediately. The world view is very huge, but the writing at the beginning is a bit hasty, which may have something to do with the number of viewers and comments. The writing of combat is not satisfactory, most of it is written in passing, and the description of cultivation is also pitiful. Most of the plots are about mythical beasts, which makes the protagonist's elf presence very small. This is what I said earlier that the writing is too hasty. Overall, the view of time is exciting enough, with a lot of obvious foreshadowing. I hope the author will slow down the pace of the text and not be too hasty, let alone eunuch! Give Shaggy a better ending, don't just forget about it.

I still support it, but if Eevee evolves into Leaf Eevee, shouldn't it be possible to level up and evolve near mossy rocks? Ice Eevee also seems to level up and evolve near rocks covered with ice, right?

Although I don't really like the protagonist who is too weak, I do like to watch slow-burning stories. However, after so many chapters, the protagonist still has too few skills. But I still look forward to the protagonist becoming stronger. Come on!

It's pretty good, I don't feel invincible, and it's pretty fast to recover the elves.

It's not bad, but the protagonist feels too frustrated. Keep up the good work (*˘˘*). .:*♡ Also, I hope there will be no female protagonist and no cp

The writing is quite good, it's not a mindless novel. The protagonist is in line with the changes of normal people after time travel, but it's a bit missing. The author will continue to work hard and make more updates! 🤗

I saw 80 photos, I can accept them, they look good

This book is quite good, the characters have distinct personalities and have their own characteristics [please update]

Great writing, keep up the good work, author!