Pokemon: A New World

This is my first time writing a book, so I'll take all suggestions into consideration. The protagonist might be a little weak in the beginning; I want to gradually build him from nothing to strength. I estimate this novel will be several million words long, and I will continue writing it as long as a few people read it.

As a new author, I think this is quite well written. It reflects the mindset of people in reality, and it's not the kind of story that jumps straight to overpowered characters. The world-building is vast, but the beginning felt rushed, which might be related to the number of readers and comments.

I'll still give it my support, but shouldn't Eevee evolve into Leafeon by leveling up near a mossy rock? And shouldn't Glaceon evolve by leveling up near an ice-covered rock as well?

While I don't particularly like stories with weak protagonists, I do enjoy slow-burn plots. However, after so many chapters, the protagonist still has too few skills. But I'm still looking forward to the protagonist getting stronger. Keep it up!

It's pretty good; it doesn't feel invincible, and capturing Pokémon is quite fast.

It's not bad, but the main character seems a bit too frustrated. Keep it up! (*˘˘*) .:*♡ Also, I hope there's no female lead and no romantic pairing.

It's well-written, not some mindless wish-fulfillment story. The protagonist's transformation is believable, typical of someone who transmigrates. However, there's a bit too little content. Author, keep up the good work and add more chapters! 🤗

Seeing 80 pictures is acceptable; they're quite nice.

This book is pretty good; the characters are vividly portrayed and each has their own unique traits. [Please update more frequently!]

Well written! Keep up the good work, author!