Automating the Shinobi World

The writing ideas are clear and not watery, and the writing skills are deep enough. Brother, please don't be a eunuch [face covering]

I have read the latest chapter, and everything else is good. It's just that it's a bit awkward for Orochimaru to ask the protagonist for advice. The protagonist tells Orochimaru everything he knows, but it feels like there is no actual reward? If your personal opinion is wrong, don't criticize [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon]

The subject matter is quite good. Although I was very angry after reading it later, the author finished writing it when I read it. There is no need to say too many angry words. It is not easy for the author. There are too many bad words. It will be a bad mood no matter who it is. The protagonist has shortcomings. This is my opinion. There are a thousand Hamlets for a thousand people. I just can't like this protagonist. I won't say too much. I wish the author's new book a success. That's it. (Also, if you know what is going to happen, you should avoid it instead of escaping, or just talk about it, just like Jiraiya, who only talks but does not change, but still escapes... This is what I said to the protagonist)

Tomato can still have a book like this. It's very good. I'm here to find faults. A well-established Kazekage apprentice is entangled with the people in the wood industry. He is afraid of Orochimaru in his own territory. It's not reasonable. He also advised Jiraiya. The person who is the best in the wood industry should not be stubborn. Is it best for the Sand Ninja Village to develop according to the original work? After all, the protagonist's attitude towards Konoha will make Konoha stronger, and the wood industry is not the Sannin's. F4 wants to fight with the Sand Ninja Village. According to the Sannin's strong sense of belonging to the wood industry, will they still shed tears and carry out Danzo's perverted threat theory? If they cause trouble in Suna Ninja Village, will the person who has an affair with the protagonist turn a blind eye? Is it because the enemy has tortured me a thousand times? I treat the enemy like my first love. It is a bit unreasonable. Personal opinion [smile]

In fact, even if I work hard now, I can't get much better, and it can't change my current living situation much. I can't get married and buy a house, and I can't live a good life if I don't work hard. Like a flea, you think you can jump up and stand shoulder to shoulder with the sun. In fact, ants and toads are watching you silently and don't speak. It's not a comparison of good and bad, but you don't have to laugh at the same time. If you don't embarrass me, I won't disgust you. It doesn't matter if you have ambitions. It doesn't matter if you lie flat. The reincarnation goes back and forth. It's just the cub in the greedy snake. It's all gone.

The logic is clear, the plot is clear, and the characters are distinct. Apart from Naruto: The Living Kyoume, this is the second particularly good Naruto fanfic I've read, but there's something wrong with the timeline. But this is also the weakness of most Naruto novels. Others are fine. It's a good book. The author is very knowledgeable. The writing is indeed fine. Another point is, my dear author, why do you like to put tildes there?

Let me prove that you read the review (I spent 3,000 hours, it's very interesting, so you can read it with confidence)

Five-star praise, the writing is unique and worth reading, but I was a little surprised in the later period. I have been a powerful person in power for many years, and I am not mature enough. I feel like I am being pushed around, and I have relatively few plans of my own.

There is such a good book! ! ! ! Come on, author!

It's novel. I remember I've seen this type of game before, and I was also doing scientific research in Sunagakure Village. But the author of that book forgot that Naruto is a world where the strong take all. No matter how well you build, robbing and destroying will always be easier than building!