Naruto: Rise Up, Kusagakure!

I don't know what will happen next. I can't stand it anymore. The Shock Fruit is really not that strong. I don't like articles written by a group of women. The tasks are too simple and the system rewards are too generous. The system stands out too much. It's a bit unclear whether the system is the protagonist or the character is the protagonist. There is also the part about seizing power. The various things used by the famous people must be very expensive. Can the protagonist afford them? Take tea as an example. You shouldn't be able to buy this if you have money, right? Will the family still have money after the purchase? There will be a grand enthronement ceremony later, which also requires money, right? Can a small family in a small village like the protagonist have the financial resources to support it?

Not much to say, I don't recommend it, the logic is not clear, the character design is not good-looking, there are many women, there are many things, and the combat power is low.

If you write like this, when will the Grass Ninja Village be unified? There is no need for water, and many plots are unnecessary. Who likes to watch cannon fodder plots? Why write so much?

Brothers, please leave some comments, the author needs to work hard!

Why are those Chinese elements really difficult to substitute, and according to the urine of the Naruto world, what if you put the ninjutsu before?

This book is not bad. Please polish it slowly. The logic is reasonable, but it has a bit of a mafia flavor. However, you can also consider a setting similar to that of the Immortal World. That is the truly extraordinary organization with very clear boundaries. Of course [smile] This is based on the fact that the force is countless times greater than that of ordinary people.

I can't stand it anymore. Are you writing about Naruto or ancient Chinese literature? It's really disgusting. You shouldn't write about Naruto. There's no flavor of Naruto at all. Ancient literature is covered in Naruto's skin, and the main character's strength in this system is too one-sided.

In the early stage, it had nothing to do with Naruto. It was basically just selling dog meat over someone else's head. In the early stage, there were just a few small families, and the fighting had nothing to do with ninjas. I thought I was reading a fantasy novel about fighting spirit turning into a horse

Unify the country of grass Did he become the Grass Shadow named after the Hokage, Raikage, Kazekage, Tsuchikage, and Mizukage? 😂😂😂

So far I feel like this book is okay