In This World of Men

It's well written, but if I were the heroine I wouldn't help them at all. I am a victim of patriarchy. In fact, I wanted to help them before, but after hearing the reason why there are no women in that world, it is impossible for me to help them. Help a group of butchers, a group of butchers who are not worthy of being human. I only need to take care of my one-third of an acre. When I have no money, I sell the fruits and vegetables I have purified and save the people around me. Why should I save the rest. Among those who survived, some of their ancestors were beasts who had never harmed a woman! Now they want to suffer a little bit and start to blame others. Then why don't they think about how the women died before? Weren't they also killed by murder or suicide in despair? If there are past and present lives, the sufferings these men are suffering now are all the sins they committed before! (Don't say that I am violent. Don't persuade others to do good unless they have suffered. If others have suffered, they may not be kind.)

This book is my favorite novel. I like the plants in the book and the kindness of the heroine. I feel that the heroine's character is not cowardly. No matter who she is, she will choose to protect herself after experiencing such a bad thing. I feel that this is normal. In this world, not everyone is a hero. Most of them are just ordinary people.

Yes, I think this book is very good. I feel like the heroine is not weak. No matter who it is, they have arrived in a strange environment. You have to protect yourself first, you can't be a big virgin!

The outline of this book is really good, but the details of the characters are not very good. There are not many bugs in the outline, but slightly more bugs in the details. For me, a female man, it can sometimes be awkward. I think it's okay for the heroine to hide herself, protect herself, and want to protect others. But even though she is silly and sweet, the Virgin is more terrifying. This style of "helping others" even when you know it may harm those around you... I feel like the author has put a lot of effort into the outline. The outline is really good and I like it very much. However, the writing power may not be enough. The characters of the supporting characters often feel inconsistent with their actions, and the details need to be strengthened. I often like the heroine for no reason, and sometimes there are small self-contradictions around 2-3 pages. Ultimately, these are because the characters are not well-characterized and established. I feel that the author is also a sweet person, so the power intrigues cannot be controlled. Such a good outline can obviously be unfolded slowly, but the result is the same as completing the task, without any foreshadowing. I can't bear to jump anymore. I hope the author will work hard and look forward to improvement. Also, with such a good outline, please save it for later writing. I feel it's 3 stars, but the outline is really good, so I give it one more star.

I like this children's novel very much. Although the heroine's character is a bit timid, I think it is very realistic.

The author's framework and plot settings are very good, but the writing style and writing techniques need to be improved to make it more attractive for readers to read. Come on, Dada [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

The heroine was a little timid in the early stages, but she slowly grew up in the later stages. Having a child of my own, I understand the responsibilities on my shoulders. I still quite like reading this book. People don't grow up in one day. I feel pretty good about this kind of book that I developed slowly. Those who like to watch can read more. So I give it five stars. Come on, author!

Very nice, good luck to the author! ! !

It's pretty good, and the content is quite rich.

Very interesting, the story is very novel!