Horror Movie NPC Goes on a Killing Spree in a Terror Game

Dear author, why don't you give me a reply just because I gave you a five-star review? Next, I will review the book and give some suggestions: First of all: the book is very good, mainly because Fu Shen's nonsensical character really appealed to my taste. Of course, the detailed description of the early team is also very good. As for the plot, it is a bit light and simple, but this is not a complaint. It complements the comedy style, and I found the author to be very active, so I like it all. Furthermore: In fact, I think the main plot can be properly developed (don't be too anxious, but it can be put on the schedule). There are currently three directions (which can be regarded as three unfilled pits). One is to reveal the purpose of the thriller game, the second is Fu Shen's life experience, and the last is the story of the Thirteenth District of Death (that's the name). You can choose any one of the three directions to develop the main plot. Of course, if the author is strong enough, it is not impossible to bear all the responsibility. If you don't develop the main plot, the book will be particularly difficult to write later on and it will easily end up unfinished. Please think again. (It's just a suggestion, but we don't want this book to be unfinished. What bad intentions could Pika have) Finally: some suggestions on how to write. I hope the author can form a main line team or something like this group of crazy people in Fairy Tale Town. After all, the main line is different from ordinary copies, and those guys haven't shown up for a long time. And regarding the topic of live broadcast, I found that the author seems to have wasted a joke. This live broadcast can actually be used to improve the word count and enrich the content. Moreover, the writing method of first person and third person, didn't the author find some wonderful uses? (Such as setting up suspense, kickback themes, etc.) This concludes the book review. I wish the author a prosperous career. I also wish all the book friends who read this good luck in wealth and all their wishes come true! Pickup Zero: Submitted I hope friends who agree can click on the arrow and push it up for the author to take a look [send a heartfelt message]

I thought it was a serious, hard-working Mugen flow, but I didn't expect the protagonist to be so crooked. I thought only the protagonist was crooked, but I didn't expect the supporting characters to go crazy together. I thought the whole game would stay this crazy, but I didn't expect the author to lay the groundwork early on, peel off the cocoons, and connect all the links. This is a novel that you think does not require using your brain, but in fact, you must use your brain, otherwise you will need to click on the comment area every minute to find someone to give you advice. This is also a novel that looks light and funny, but is actually interspersed with various social hot spots, and almost every copy can remind you of real events. The author's humorous writing contains biting satire and criticism of current ills. In the portrayal of the protagonist, being mean-mouthed and powerful is only the most public character surface of the protagonist. Deep in the protagonist's heart, there is kindness, the belief that the mission must be carried out, loyalty, and compassion for all living beings... It is precisely because of this that he seeks the most impossible of thousands of possibilities and seeks the best solution. He seems to not care about life, but in fact he is cautious. How can such a protagonist not make readers excited? Having said that, I really want to have the mouth of the protagonist, a master of anti-correction, anti-anxiety, and reverse PUA... The main theme is a person who catches someone by surprise and catches them off guard [send the heart]

Reading a horror novel made me laugh out loud. I like the character of the male protagonist so much. It's the first time I've seen this kind of person who is not only not mentally retarded, but the people around him are also not mentally retarded. His teammates are also very obedient, especially Yueyue. I really love him after that.

Let me contribute a book review of this book. The evaluation is: "A funny article cloaked in horror". So far, the words are correct, the overall flow is smooth, and there are no poisonous points. It's good [like], but... It's just a little short and weak [please read carefully] More soon! Everyone in the comment section is full of talented people. Why do I feel like I want to read more in the comment section than in the book? [What] [Thinking] (But books are still the best! [Admiration])

The dimension shuttles into horror, and the horror is preceded by Fu Yan. Cramping and pulling out bones is frightening and difficult. It frightens the whole world and begs for defeat. A glimpse into the world reveals three thousand mysteries within the body. The majestic spirit creates the world, but it is difficult to penetrate the memory.

It's so to my liking. I love it so much. I like the main character who is crazy, crooked, bt, and occasionally serious for three seconds. It directly hits my heart [shy]

I read this book for the second time and I liked Fu Yan very much. I thought it was a light-hearted novel at first, but after reading it, I realized that Fu Yan has really taken on a lot. The funnier and nonsensical it is on the surface, the sadder it is on the inside. As the saying goes, "The core of comedy is tragedy." I really feel sorry for Fu Yan. As much as he laughs at the front, he sheds tears later. The whole text is very logical, and every point that readers find a little strange will become a foreshadowing. No matter how you write it, it can be logical and self-consistent, and it becomes more and more brain-burning as you go to the end. The author is really amazing. The sublimation was also very good in the end, and there was no unfinished story at all. It is not really a group portrait article, but the other characters were also well described. However, I still felt that the emotional line between Lin Ye and He Shuyang was a bit abrupt, although the author explained it later. I just feel that it would be nice if the extra story showed that they were thinking about Fu Yan after losing their memory. After all, Fu Yan is a gentle and soft-hearted god. He may seem cold and ruthless, but he is actually the most gentle.

It is not easy to write an article in a very huge setting, especially when it comes to conveying the values ​​that you want to express to the audience. However, the article "Lantern" is the best article I have read on the mixed male channel in the past four years. It has a perfect grasp of human nature and the protagonist's righteousness🥺There are contrasts between the darkness and warmth of human nature, and in the doomsday setting, Lin Ye Arranging a sacrifice plot with a character like Fu Yan (luckily he survived later otherwise I would have cried to death) is quite valuable. After experiencing so many life-and-death battles, giving in countless times, and fighting with all their strength, as soldiers, sacrifice reflects their glorious side and best explains the fearlessness and responsibility of soldiers and heroes🥺 In short, it's so cool! I've been chasing it for maybe a year (? Maybe not that long but it's really a long time). Seeing it end gives me the feeling of an old mother seeing her son grow up (?) Not to mention, let's go and have hotpot with Fu Shen!

It looks good. The main character is neither a virgin nor the kind who kills everyone he sees. He likes piranha flowers and is really fast. The settings are pretty good. It's very enjoyable to watch. [Like][Like][Like]

[Admiration] I love this book so much! The gore is accompanied by comedy, which made me grin. One second it might be serious, but the next second it looks like a joke. Moreover, the author is not sloppy at all. After a few chapters, it only looks like three words. It's so cool! ! ! And there is no female protagonist. I recommend, recommend, and recommend! Say important things three times.