Rule Horror: Don't Look Back During 72 Hours in the Dorm

In fact, I personally think that the author is more suitable for writing scripts. The plot development, scenes, micro-actions, and psychological descriptions are simply an open-book examination for an actor with some skills. I use the audio book, which sounds a bit cumbersome, but if it is a realistic scene, it is also very three-dimensional. The author can consider short play scripts, or short plays now produced by AI. Of course I'm not a professional, just my personal opinion.

I read part of it to encourage the author! I quite like the way homework is written! The descriptions of the details are very specific and vivid, and the descriptions of some horror scenes are so contagious that I almost lost my mind when reading them. The writing skills are still very good! My small suggestion is that the pace is a bit slow. You can feel that the author hopes to show the panic and suspicion in this situation, but the results of all the guesses are not sorted out and verified in time, which leads to the accumulation of various clues and the inability to advance () which may lead to the abandonment of the book! (Armor: That's how I felt after reading part of it! I'm still reading now and looking forward to the subsequent answers to the mystery!) Oh, yes, and at the beginning, I felt like everyone suddenly accepted that they were controlled by the dormitory rules! When someone feels that something supernatural is happening, their first reaction should be to go home quickly! I think this place can be improved! 🤓👆

It's a good read. I originally came here because I saw the introduction said there were no cheats and wanted to read a pure rules-based weird story. But it doesn't look like a rules-based one, but this kind of supernatural kind is also very good-looking and suits my taste.

Waiting for the update, it's very interesting, but when I watched it, I couldn't figure out some of the plot and stuff, and it was just a little confusing when I watched it. But the writing is very good. When I was watching it, I thought that the male protagonist and other roommates could not get out and were all staying in that world. I was about to shed tears. But luckily, most of them still came out like the male protagonist. The author has very good control over emotions and is very delicate. I think this is a book with great potential! I will keep up with the updates. Keep up the good work, author [Love]

The overall horror atmosphere of the novel is very good, and you can feel the depressing environment. However, there are too many unnecessary embellishments. One character's action can only have three or four sentences of embellishments. It is recommended to reduce it a little bit later in the plot.

After reading more than a dozen chapters, it really has a scary atmosphere, which is something I rarely experience when reading other horror and suspense works by Tomato. The punctuation marks are well received. I can feel that the author has read a lot of books. I would like to support it with five stars.

I just finished reading the first copy. Generally speaking, the logic and correlation are relatively strong. It is recommended to memorize the information when reading, otherwise you may not understand the subsequent development. The scenes written by the author are very atmospheric and easy to imagine. I hope that the protagonist will gradually become bolder as he grows up, and some fighting scenes will be added.

So far, the writing is good. The content of the book is to my taste. It is good-looking and attracts me to read on! I give the author five stars, and I hope he can keep writing without crashing, and I will keep reading until the end!

I think it's very good, so I've only read a little bit. The first few chapters are full of logic and atmosphere. In short, it's very good! ! !

It's good-looking. I like some of the descriptions very much. They all have a sense of immersion. I have to say that the protagonist is really brave. I can still imagine some monsters. I was scared to death after listening to it in the middle of the night. I will never listen to it in the middle of the night again. I feel that I can definitely play the first copy of [Chigua] at around 9 o'clock (you can say it is a copy, the contrast at the end is quite interesting)