Reborn in One Piece: Unraveling the Mystery from the Start

Part of it relies on the support of peers, and the rest is the author's strength. Disadvantages: The fighting scenes lack tension and lack of visual appeal. Suggestion: refer to the writing method of fighting scenes in "What should I do if I get stronger and stronger".

Since the author currently has too few chapters, I am not very good at judging. I can only say that it is not poisonous so far and can be consumed with confidence. It feels more and more watery. Maybe the author has no inspiration? Really, I personally think that the content of Incarnation of the God Stick can be briefly mentioned. After all, there should be very few people who haven't read the original work and come to read the fanfic, right? It's like waiting for several days, and the updated chapters are just a matter of reading the original work again.

I particularly like this book. Now looking for a good book in Tomato is like looking for gold in 💩.

I personally like this kind of subject matter. I hope the author can write it down well.

It's very nice, I hope the author will update it more. Who can see this?

I can only say that it's okay, but Wudi Shuangwen saw 20 pictures, which are basically equivalent to the strength of an organization of the Four Emperors. It even feels like it's a bit more advanced in terms of technology. No, it should be beyond the world in terms of technology.

It is better to give resource fruits to dead objects Because dead things are equivalent to eternity Death is not permanent for living people

A very good pirate novel, comparable to One Piece: King of Pirates. I hope it won't end badly. Come on! ! !

Very good, but can you write more about the struggle for national development?

I don't know why this book is, I just think it looks good [please read carefully] I feel so bored, I'm drowning