I Was Planning to Cultivate Immortality, Then the Fourth Calamity Arrived

Hello, author, I am the parent of this account. Recently, my child has not been eating or talking, and she is not angry at all. There is no expression on her face, but I found that she only laughs and becomes angry when she is reading Tomato novels. Later, I turned on my child's phone while she was sleeping and found out that she has been reading your book recently, and I also found a critical illness notice under her pillow. She is running out of time, and I can't do anything for her. The only thing I can do is to pray that the author will write dozens more chapters a day. Isn't that too much? I hope you can spend her last days with her and don't let her die with regrets. Hey, my poor baby, please, (Don't be a jerk, don't be a eunuch)

The subject matter is very novel and the writing is very good. I just have two thoughts. , 1. In view of the predecessor, I hope this book is best without CP, but if it doesn't work, it can also be for women [I'm about to cry] 2. Will Qian Moyun, the reborn person, have too many roles? Personally, I don't feel very good about his performance. If there are other arrangements, I won't tell you.

This novel is okay. I can hardly find any major flaws. The plot is very immersive. The characters are very vivid and the atmosphere is good. This kind of semi-invincible protagonist has an online IQ. The story is good. The plot is interlocking, as if the world in the book is a real world. I don't know about others. Anyway, I am immersed in it. So far, this novel is very good and worth watching. It's just that the title and cover are not too attractive.

Isn't it pretty? Why aren't there many people [laughing evilly]

Overall, this book is quite good, the plot is interesting, and there are basically no detoxification points so far. The disadvantage is that the characterization in some places is not detailed enough, and the beginning... I don't feel very good about it personally. It would definitely be better if the former can be changed, but for things like detailing, it relies more on writing skills, and the latter can be done as you like. So... As long as you can keep writing, it's really a good book. [Making faces] There are so few people.

More elements, what? Are they all my favorite elements? That's okay! More!

The writing is quite good. The beauty of the protagonist is highlighted in the article. It is very comfortable for a protagonist like me. It is not pornographic. Although there is a bit of pornography in it, it is not worth mentioning for other books. The protagonist will not participate in such things. It seems that there is no male protagonist at present. It is like an invincible novel. However, it may not be very friendly to water friends who want to directly see the fourth natural disaster. The transition time in the early stage is a bit long (it is the opportunity of the protagonist) and the entire game is not controlled by the protagonist, but the protagonist is still the protagonist in this game. I haven't seen much of it so far. It seems that the protagonist can issue tasks to players. If you directly want to see Day 4 Dai, you have to skip to the second chapter. So overall, this book is highly recommended, but I hope the author will not assign a male protagonist to the heroine [smile]

At present, this book seems to be a very good one. I hope the author can keep it up. Come on, author, update it quickly. Don't be a eunuch.

It's pretty good, better than most of Tomato's articles with female protagonists, and I feel like this is not a female-driven article, but similar to a male-driven online game.

It can be seen that the author was working on the plot carefully and slowly in the early and middle stages. In the later stage, the results may not be very good and the pace is very fast. As a result, the book was completed only two-thirds of the human world. Generally speaking, the writing is very good. However, it is a bit messy about the division of realms, fairy arts, martial arts, and talents. Not to mention the fourth natural disaster player in the title of the book. There are not many highlights in the whole text. Generally speaking, they are used as cannon fodder to fill the scene. Personally, I feel that I can write a behind-the-scenes article based on this. Taking the Five Elements Sect as the main body and describing the group portraits of players in the Three Realms, there may be a lot of readers who will pay for it. After all, the current behind-the-scenes writing is uneven. There is no pattern of behind-the-scenes masterminds. You don't have to fight this boss or kill that boss every day.