Naruto: The Pot King’s Son, My Ninjutsu Has Mutated

Give yourself a like, it's reasonable, right? [Shy]

The author's writing is good. This kind of flesh-and-blood Konoha is what Naruto fans really want to see. It's a prosperous scene. I feel really good about it. The main protagonist is different from other system streams in that his strength is improved through his own efforts. It feels flesh-and-blood and not so rigid. He also has a heart to protect Konoha. There are many laughs in it and you won't be overly addicted to the feeling of upgrading the protagonist while reading. The rhythm is relaxed and relaxed, and it's a good book!

It's all good, just too little. Come on. I hope there will be a heroine. It doesn't matter if there is more or less. Just don't be a dog licker. They are all normal people and have emotions and desires. You can't just masturbate for the rest of your life. It is simply anti-human. You can't live just for the sake of living. There is no enjoyment at all. There is no point in living to become stronger.

This book so far (76 chapters) can be said to be a very good fanfic (fanfic, it's special! Please read the fanfic clearly, it is not the original work, please leave the trolls alone). It can be said that small parts of the characters have been changed well. The writing style is not bad so far. There is nothing particularly embarrassing. The characteristics of each character are also described (only a small part). There are not many systems. Playing with all kinds of memes is called a 6! This is pretty good. As for the plot, we haven't left Konoha Village yet and so far we can't see much! The protagonist's identity is positioned as the son of Guoying. So far in this book, the description of the character Guoying can be said to be a big reversal (I personally like it better)! It is well described that no one is born a bad person, and no one is born a good person. As the old saying goes, don't persuade others to be kind without suffering from them! Give the author some small suggestions (see clearly Suggestions Suggestions Suggestions As for whether the author will read this suggestion, whether it can be used, whether it will be used, I don't know, this depends on the author's own wishes) Can you add a little bit of Chinese style elements? For example, in terms of weapons and psychics, for example, the protagonist's plug-in mutates. Is it feasible to mutate psychic beasts? Then is it possible for the psychic beast to come from The Classic of Mountains and Seas? Or is it possible that the psychic beast comes from other anime worlds? (I'm complaining in a low voice. I feel that there is a little less interaction between the author and the readers. Of course, the author may be quite busy [laughs])

The content is still a little bit short. Can you write more and then publish all the manuscripts? Actually, to be honest, I like movies without female protagonists, but the content is quite interesting, so it doesn't matter if there are no female protagonists, and it doesn't matter if there are multiple female protagonists. After all, there are very few people who write about Naruto who don't write about conspiracy theories. Most people who write about Naruto are based on various conspiracy theories. So I support the author from a humanitarian perspective.

Why is the rating so low?

It's really good-looking. It changed my impression of Danzo. The characters are well drawn.

It's not bad, but the author should update it quickly, if you don't want to throw off the street

It looks good, but where is your home, the author? I will go to you with a beheading knife and discuss with you why I should finish the novel directly. Don't worry, I am a law-abiding citizen and will not hold a knife to your neck [smile][smile][smile][smile]

How to say it? It was okay, but something seemed to be missing, and then I suddenly realized that the protagonist can actually share those mutant ninjutsu. He doesn't need to share all of them, just some of them. He doesn't need to share them with everyone in Konoha. He only needs to share these mutant ninjutsu with his relatives, such as the Three Shadows and Danzo. This is also helpful to the protagonist. And you can give Kakashi a guideline. Why don't you give nothing to your relatives?