One Piece: From the Start, I Became Admiral Kizaru’s Big Brother
海贼：开局成了黄猿大哥
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 172k Words
- Genre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Updated
- 4y ago
- English
- Request a translation
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82Chapters
976Reads · 30 days
374.4kReads · all time
102Shelf adds, last 14 days
8.2Score
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Neither of you will say anything, right? Then I won't say anything either 😏
Will the Navy eventually break away from the World Government? If the novel maintains this level of quality, it should be a masterpiece of naval fiction. The promotion speed is a bit too fast; he's only a Rear Admiral in 30 chapters. At this rate, will he be an Admiral by chapter 100? The plot could be a bit richer, and the update speed could be a little faster.
The book's overall pacing is a bit rushed, but the writing style is relatively relaxed, making time slip away unnoticed [I've learned something new]. Even the final outline reveals that foreshadowing and other plot points are resolved well. Character development is slightly lacking, but the overall structure is excellent, which is a big plus.
Type quickly, don't be whipped!
It's really good, but the ages seem a bit off. By the time Luffy appears, he's already over thirty, but in the original work, Huang Yuan is over fifty. As his older brother, he's definitely older. The author could have made him pure gold. Also, the ship's speed is a bit too fast; they reach Kawaki Island in just two chapters.
Not bad, not bad, very interesting, and the concept is quite bold. Why not go even bolder? Awaken the Glint-Glint Fruit and become Ultraman; the Rumble-Rumble Fruit and become Susanoo; the Magma-Magma Fruit and become a bloodthirsty oil tycoon demon god.
I. The story is thrilling and the plot is rich. Second, it is a combination of science and magic. Third, it reflects the author's lofty humanitarian spirit.
It's pretty good, just too short.
It's alright, it just ended a bit too quickly.
I think it would be better if the protagonist ate the Rumble-Rumble Fruit.