Apocalypse: Starting with an SSS-Rank Ability, I Hoard Billions in Supplies

New book, new attempt, please be gentle with your criticism if there are any mistakes.

Overall, it's good. The initial resource gathering takes a bit too long. As some people have said, even though someone gives you money, you don't give specific advice, just a general idea. But the later parts are well-written, allowing for gradual growth. However, don't recruit too many women, otherwise it loses its appeal. Alternatively, you could train your own followers or something.

In the opening chapters, after the school beauty was kidnapped, she went back to her family and told them about the apocalypse, even calling the protagonist to ask about it. Later, her family said they would investigate the protagonist. So why did her entire family die afterwards, without any warning?

I'm giving you four stars. I didn't give you one star because I was afraid you'd get too proud and ruin the later parts of the story. The plot is pretty good so far (I've already devoured one ♀) 😏 Keep up the good work, author! [Requesting more updates!] I hope the main character's personality will become more mature and stable later on. [Bump!]

If you don't want to read it, you don't have to. Nobody's forcing you to. I think as long as it's written, that's fine. Don't take novels so seriously. The author is a beginner, so is it okay if they don't understand something? Give the author five stars to show your support!

The concept and theme are good. Why not make a motorhome for free? Wouldn't that mean you wouldn't need to go out later and could expand your activity range? And hopefully, it will have mechanical expertise and modification capabilities later on. I hope the harem in the later stages won't be too big.

Thankfully, it was just a minor incident involving a small dog. I hope that later on, if any of the characters don't show me a very firm attitude, even if it's just those two servants, they should be killed immediately.

It looks pretty good.

Hmm, it feels pretty good.

The book is good, quite good. It's a bit juvenile, but otherwise there aren't any major problems. It's decisive and ruthless, unafraid of moral blackmail, using violence to stop violence, which is good.