Open the Door! It's Captain Awei!

Hello everyone, I am opening the door. I am the author of Captain Ah Wei, Half a Step of Time, and the new account of Dark August. Check-in from Yizhuang in the last book: I gave Uncle Jiu a headache and didn't handle it well later. I apologize to everyone here. I will definitely write a new book well. Please give me five stars, please give me good reviews and support. Thank you Yanzu. Thank you fairies.

Support the new book by yourself. The last book was not finished well, so I am working hard on this one. The new book has been signed. If you like Xiao Hei's works, you can come and read it! The people downstairs are all Yanzu and Tianxianyou. Jiu Shuwen, so if you become a disciple of Jiu Shu, there should be no problem. After all, if you don't like Jiu Shuwen, you may also read Jiu Shuwen.

I can't get rid of the image of Captain Ah Wei in my mind. Cousin, I want to drink tea

This book is very well written in terms of time-traveling Jiu Shu system... Except for the fact that the martial arts is not awesome at the beginning, it is much better after I changed the way of writing... I personally suggest that if the martial arts moves are enlarged and written, and combined with Taoism, I think the effect should be better [Thinking] I have to say one thing, 🐶Author, you have written so little that I lost it after reading it twice, please update it quickly [angry][angry][angry][angry][angry][angry][angry][angry]

This book is well written. The last book was not well written, but it was not bad. But why did your name, the author, change? But I still give you a good review. Please call me a good person. If I hadn't looked at your name, Dark August, I wouldn't have known it was you.

I personally support the author because the last book was amazingly written, and it is relatively great among Uncle Nine fanfics, but! I feel that this book is not as good as the previous one. The first few chapters include content such as Ghost Biting Ghost, Taoist Yi Mei, Mr. Zombie, etc., And you can vaguely feel the settings of the protagonist traveling to various worlds in the later period. These settings are enough to make the content and plot of the entire book collapse. If you think about it, some people are here just for Uncle Jiu. After you have written the things in Uncle Jiu's world, who else will read the time-travel plot? ? ? The beginning is interspersed with the plots of several other parts. Anyone who reads it will easily think that this book is going to be unfinished. The above is my personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it!

Since I often watch movies on Huya Live, I really like the works starring Lin Zhengying, and I also appreciate Uncle Jiu's time-travel work. Please don't write invincible in the future. Give it a little more difficulty. Otherwise, the protagonist will rise to the top in one step. Readers will read it all at a glance. The evaluation of stars later will also be uneven. It is all because they did not read it carefully. It all depends on how to deal with zombies, ghosts or the content of the harem. It is recommended to strengthen the passive skills of the protagonist. There are a group of people who are born to be his enemies, haha, right? It would be better for the protagonist to crush them all the way than to slowly explore them. Makes it easier for people to integrate into the plot. Finally, the author wrote this book very well, five stars. I hope I won't be invincible all the way, otherwise I would just choose the chapter and read it

The writing is really good, and my IQ is online. It is a book that can be read. The author's logic is clear. Very nice. Please keep up the good work. People update 15 times a day. We don't ask for more. Just ten or eight updates a day. None of the donkeys in the production team can rest like you.

Come on, author! I quite like this book. I have thought about the idea of ​​Ah Wei as the main character before. Regarding Extraordinary Plunder, can we consider the TV series version of Fengyun? There are: Fire Bodhi, various magical weapons, and the dragon essence of the dragon. Eating one pill can greatly increase one's power and make one immortal. And speaking of martial arts, author, what do you think of Rainbow Cat and Blue Rabbit? Among the bright swords there are the divine sword, the bright sword and the black dragon sword. In "The Rainbow Cat Walks the End of the World with a Sword," there are five elements crystal stones that contain the energy of the five elements. A phoenix and a black dragon even appeared in the theatrical version of Fire Phoenix. In addition, you can also consider Legend of Sword and Fairy, which contains the remaining energy that Yun contains to shape the world, the Five Spiritual Pearls.

Not bad! ! It's very well written. It would be best if you can't wait until the appointment is deadlocked in the future.