Jujutsu: The Silent Spirit Child

Are there two male protagonists? [I'm about to cry] If so, who is the other one? [Almost crying] [Almost crying]

The book is good, I am waiting for the day when it becomes popular, the author will give you a lot of support (●'◡'●)ﾉ♥

It looks good, but that dog tomato won't let me comment. I'd really like to thank you. There's no button to open the comment. This G tomato has so many bugs.

I personally think this is one of Tomato's better cursed fics. At least the setting is not broken, and the author has carefully understood the original work. The setting and combat power system are not bad, but it will definitely become more difficult as you write. Come on, author, don't make it unfinished.

It looks good, at least so far. However, I always feel that something is missing. I feel uncomfortable without writing about the protagonist's growth and learning process. I think even if I don't write it in detail, it would be better to write it casually than to summarize it in one stroke. That's it. I will add more when I have other ideas in the future.

I suddenly came across this novel. I didn't read such short new books, but I was interested in magic so I clicked in. I finished reading it in a few hours. Generally speaking, I feel that the connection is a little too fast in some places and the writing style is a bit naive. The author should be a novice, but there are very few poisonous points, so it is worth reading. Also, it is best to avoid "well, well" in the dialogue of the novel. After all, it is not an anime, and the novel will be a bit strange. [Read it carefully] Come on, author.

Overall, it is a high-level conjuration fanfic, with reasonable combat power and a very good self-created plot. The word count is small and the conjuration fanfic is a bit unpopular, otherwise this book would have done very well.

As far as the plot of the story is concerned, the author writes the time points in great detail, and the story progresses very well without being abrupt. Nowadays, there are not many good ones that write about spells. This book is considered to be of high quality [please update]

The needle is not filed, which is an unexpected surprise. I didn't expect to see a book about spells in Tomato. Moreover, the author's writing is not only slightly better than the novels about magic that I have read before, but why are you so short? [What] By the way, the most important thing is that the combat power has not collapsed!

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