From the Start, With an Unbelievable Talent, I Choose Jordan to Build a Dynasty

Hello, fellow book lovers. In the vast sea of ​​people, I am honored that you can come and read my novel. I am a new author, you can call me Xiaobai. This is the first basketball article and the second novel I have written. Here, I would like to ask everyone, what are the poisonous points of basketball articles in general? I took a look at the basketball articles written by other authors, and found that some had harems. When I wrote about football, many readers didn't even want a single female protagonist. So if you find any poisonous points or mistakes in my novels, please tell me if it's convenient. Thank you all in advance. In addition to being a new author, I am also a reader like everyone else, but I am a reader who acts on impulse. Now I can read other people's books objectively, but I find that reading novels written by myself can sometimes lead to confusion. Each of your good suggestions is the nutritional element for my novel to grow into an excellent work.

It looks very comfortable, and it is obviously different from other basketball articles. He does not have those anti-human skills in anime, nor does he break records from the beginning and get 40 or 50 points. Although there is a system, he also grows step by step and conquers one by one. The protagonist has a clear sense of teamwork (with a God's perspective) and will not deliberately score points, at least for now, which I think is very good. Some basketball players score points in isolation, and almost only pass the ball to him alone in a game, which is very unrealistic. Having said so much, come on! I hope you will get better and better as you write more, and more and more people will read it.

I have read a lot of basketball articles, but I always felt that something was wrong. This one was very suitable for my taste. It is not invincible and slowly grows up. What surprised me most is that it did not travel very far. In other books, there are always plots of fighting against Jordan, against Kobe, against LeBron James. This book made me feel the feeling of a new star slowly rising in the new era. It is really good-looking.

In Mr. Qiao's battle of proof, he and his teammates were in charge of killing each other. He was responsible for the random killing, and his teammates were responsible for the killing.

Come on💪I will always support the author. I have read a lot of basketball novels, but I still think this novel has a different feel and is very good. Come on. Come on. I just wish I could update more and I just finished reading it [crying] [crying]

I haven't finished the book yet, but when I saw that the main character's name was Liu Xia, I couldn't suppress my complaints. I could already foresee the wonderful scene where the whole audience would shout "obscene" after the main character scored a good goal. There is nothing wrong with foreigners adding nationality before calling the protagonist, but people from your own country also add nationality when calling him. I think you are exaggerating the number of words [laughing and crying]

Recommended. I hope the author can add more tricks to a certain audio and video. Don't send love messages all the time. The audience will have visual fatigue and have already guessed the result. Since it is daily life, you can ask the team if they can share the team's catering, training machines, etc., And share entertainment projects (love volunteers must be included, but they can be easily carried through, and there must also be duels). However, this is a basketball novel, and the focus is on the basketball game. Don't write too much.

Overall, it's pretty good. Here are some suggestions for the author. ① If the author really wants the protagonist to become that kind of fancy passer, it is still recommended that the protagonist changes to a point guard. The protagonist's various abilities are quite consistent with those of a point guard. For similar playing styles, you can refer to Magic or Nash. And I am also looking forward to the emergence of a traditional point guard in today's small ball leagues. ② In terms of configuration, the author can find a scorer for the protagonist (specifically, Kemba Walker... Can be used as a trading chip). Anyway, the protagonist organizes the offense, and the teammates are responsible for putting the ball into the basket. You can find some players like KD or Harden. At the same time, the protagonist also has three-point shooting ability, which can help them open up space and complement each other. ③The protagonist's offensive desire should not be so low. The small forward is the most comprehensive among the five positions. You can appropriately add offensive methods, such as mid-range shots and breakthrough layups, which can increase the enjoyment of the game and the excitement of the article.

To be honest, it's okay. But brother, are you really doing it? Write about the game. You still have the contract with the sneaker brand. Don't the protagonists accept advertisements? I hope it can be written about life. Come on, brother [like]

When writing about basketball, write about basketball well. Elena and that Xiaoli write more than basketball.