A Magical Journey Beginning at Hogwarts

The book is not bad, I hope there won't be any emotional lines. If you think your writing is good, then I will look forward to your work. Please don't split the cp. The heroine can have another one, and it doesn't have to be fixed on Hermione. This is just an opinion. You are the author, come on [get it][get it][get it][get it]

It's nice, but the update is too slow, and it's only one chapter. Luo Binghe waited for Shen Qingqiu for 5 years, Xue Yang waited for Xiao Xingchen for 8 years, Lan Wangji waited for Wei Wuxian for 13 years, Ye Hua waited for Bai Qian for 300 years, Yuwen Tuo waited for Ning Ke for 500 years, Huacheng waited for Xie Lian for 800 years, Feng Qingxue waited for Baili Tu Su has been waiting for 900 years, Long Kui has been waiting for Long Yang for 1000 years, Yi Xiaochuan has been waiting for Yuji for 2000 years, Su Jiuer has been waiting for Feng Xi for 3000 years, Xiyao has been waiting for Feipeng for thousands of years, Zixuan has been waiting for Changqing for three lives and three lives, and I have been waiting for your update.

This book is very well written, and the plot from the beginning to the present is very good. I have a soft request. I hope the heroine is not Hermione. Of course, whether there is a heroine in the end or not, the author decides who the heroine is. I just have such a small idea! I hope the author's book will become a hit!

If you don't update, I don't like it. Let's see what you do in the future. After smashing the pot and selling the iron, it was still less than a cent and a half. If you update, I will like it and make a lot of money for you. Luo Binghe waited for Shen Qingqiu for 5 years, Xue Yang waited for Xiao Xingchen for 8 years, Lan Wangji waited for Wei Wuxian for 13 years, Dahua waited for Bai Qian for 300 years, Sun Wukong waited for Tang Monk for 500 years, Yuwen Tuo waited for Ning Ke for 500 years, Huacheng waited for Xie Lian for 800 years, Feng Qingxue waited for Baili Tusu for 900 years, and Long Kui waited for Long Yang for 10 years. In 2000, White Snake waited for Xu Xian, in 1000, Yi Xiaochuan waited for Yu Shu, in 2000, Su Jiuer waited for Feng Xi, in 3000, Xiyao waited for Feipeng for thousands of years, Zixuan waited for Changqing for three lives and three lives, and I have been waiting for your update [doge] A woman was lying weakly on the bed, her face could not hide the paleness. There was a slight smile on his lips. Her outstretched hand trembled slightly, and tears shone in the corners of her eyes. The hoarse voice murmured: "Alcoa, more... The protagonist is really..., Indescribable

Or maybe he's the director of the Snake House. His name is Severus Snape, not Snape Severus.

If the protagonist didn't have contact with Hermione, I would give it five stars.

It's well written, but I hope there won't be a heroine or that the heroine won't be Hermione 666 [awkward laughter] Delete my book review

I hope there can be another female lead, that's great, come on!

Not bad, very good-looking, I hope it doesn't have a female protagonist. The protagonist is like a great villain

All I can say is that your logic (for me) is pretty good, and it's a bit irritating and wonderful. Your idea - good! Please keep working hard^0^~ After all, you make people angry, but at least you are not out of touch from the beginning to the end. You like a girl. (That's what I feel. Don't complain.) But if you try to write romance, I think you can become ridiculously popular. I'll give you four stars.