A Magical Journey Starting at Hogwarts

The book is not bad, I hope there won't be any emotional lines. If you think your writing is good, then I will look forward to your work. Please don't split the cp. The heroine can have another one, and it doesn't have to be fixed on Hermione. This is just an opinion. You are the author, come on [get it][get it][get it][get it]

It's nice, but the update is too slow, and it's only one chapter. Luo Binghe waited for Shen Qingqiu for 5 years, Xue Yang waited for Xiao Xingchen for 8 years, Lan Wangji waited for Wei Wuxian for 13 years, Ye Hua waited for Bai Qian for 300 years, Yuwen Tuo waited for Ning Ke for 500 years, Huacheng waited for Xie Lian for 800 years, Feng Qingxue waited for Baili Tu Su has been waiting for 900 years, Long Kui has been waiting for Long Yang for 1000 years, Yi Xiaochuan has been waiting for Yuji for 2000 years, Su Jiuer has been waiting for Feng Xi for 3000 years, Xiyao has been waiting for Feipeng for thousands of years, Zixuan has been waiting for Changqing for three lives and three lives, and I have been waiting for your update.

This book is very well written, and the plot from the beginning to the present is very good. I have a soft request. I hope the heroine is not Hermione. Of course, whether there is a heroine in the end or not, the author decides who the heroine is. I just have such a small idea! I hope the author's book will become a hit!

If you don't update, I don't like it. Let's see what you do in the future. After smashing the pot and selling the iron, it was still less than a cent and a half. If you update, I will like it and make a lot of money for you. Luo Binghe waited for Shen Qingqiu for 5 years, Xue Yang waited for Xiao Xingchen for 8 years, Lan Wangji waited for Wei Wuxian for 13 years, Dahua waited for Bai Qian for 300 years, Sun Wukong waited for Tang Monk for 500 years, Yuwen Tuo waited for Ning Ke for 500 years, Huacheng waited for Xie Lian for 800 years, Feng Qingxue waited for Baili Tusu for 900 years, and Long Kui waited for Long Yang for 10 years. In 2000, White Snake waited for Xu Xian, in 1000, Yi Xiaochuan waited for Yu Shu, in 2000, Su Jiuer waited for Feng Xi, in 3000, Xiyao waited for Feipeng for thousands of years, Zixuan waited for Changqing for three lives and three lives, and I have been waiting for your update [doge] A woman was lying weakly on the bed, her face could not hide the paleness. There was a slight smile on his lips. Her outstretched hand trembled slightly, and tears shone in the corners of her eyes. The hoarse voice murmured: "Alcoa, more... The protagonist is really..., Indescribable

Or maybe he's the director of the Snake House. His name is Severus Snape, not Snape Severus.

If the protagonist didn't have contact with Hermione, I would give it five stars.

It's well written, but I hope there won't be a heroine or that the heroine won't be Hermione 666 [awkward laughter] Delete my book review

I hope there can be another female lead, that's great, come on!

Not bad, very good-looking, I hope it doesn't have a female protagonist. The protagonist is like a great villain

All I can say is that your logic (for me) is pretty good, and it's a bit irritating and wonderful. Your idea - good! Please keep working hard＾0＾~ After all, you make people angry, but at least you are not out of touch from the beginning to the end. You like a girl. (That's what I feel. Don't complain.) But if you try to write romance, I think you can become ridiculously popular. I'll give you four stars.

It's great. The character of the protagonist is very good, and it reflects the gentleman's generous and considerate attitude very well. However, I hope that the change in the relationship with Hermione must be done well. If it changes too quickly, it will be very toxic, and if it changes too slowly, it is better to break up. So I hope the author will work hard.

This is the best novel I have ever seen. The protagonist has an above-average IQ and protects himself wisely, but his heart is broken because of the Iron Triangle. This kind of Slytherin is really so adorable [love][love][love] I hope the heroine is not Hermione, betrayal is the most shameful thing [angry][angry][angry] I feel like there is something wrong with the Iron Triangle's outlook on things, and Hagrid! If the protagonist wants to complete the mission in the future, it is better to leave them alone! . They will be protected by Dumbledore anyway [rolls eyes][rolls eyes][rolls eyes]

Author, who are you? The Guinness World Record is typing 807 letters per minute. Based on the six letters required for each Chinese character, you can type about 134 letters per minute. Since you are not a Guinness World Record holder, let's calculate it as 100 words per minute. According to WHO standards, a person's healthy sleep standard is eight hours, and you spend about two hours eating every day. Time, then take another 40 minutes. Go to the toilet for 20 minutes to wash up, exercise, two hours to trigger inspiration, and then remove an hour of free time. You should have nine hours to type, and type out about 435,780 words. Calculated based on at least 2,000 words per chapter, but how come you only have so little content every day? Honestly, are you deducting? Even the donkeys in the production team dare not take a break like you???????

It's really good to read hahahaha, it fits my taste. There was a book before where the main character made rapid progress and he finished all the books in the first grade😢. This one is more reasonable and has rich content🌚🌚🌚. It's my favorite Harry Potter book👉👈 Well, how can I put it this way? I was very surprised at first, but I stopped reading it often after that. Today I read a few chapters again, and I can't put my finger on it. The protagonist obviously has the strength to crush Hermione, but he still has to listen to her to persuade her? So lick the protagonist? It's really not a mistake if the protagonist makes a mistake. Just get angry on the surface and then make up in a few days😅. Let's take a closer look and see if it's really not that good.

The author is great. I really hope you let the protagonist break up with Harry Potter, because the protagonist is pursuing friendship, but they betrayed the protagonist, and Abe was hurt, why wouldn't he be angry? To be honest, I really like your book. But I really don't want Abe to be wronged. Hey, do you know that we really feel sorry for him and don't want him to be wronged. So the author please tell me, for example, Harry Potter revealed this news, which led some people to arrest Abe. At first Harry Potter refused to admit it, but finally he questioned Harry Potter when there were clues. Eventually the two of them broke up. Part ways. The author is great, there is only so much I want to say, I hope you will read it carefully.

I think giving a high score can help more people read this book, so I won't be the only one who feels uncomfortable reading it [Thinking]

It's very interesting, I just hope the main character can be beautiful alone

It's super, super good-looking, but I feel like the protagonist is a little bit like a virgin, and won't refuse other people's requests. The more you look at the back, the more you will find that the protagonist will never refuse others, especially Hermione. It feels like it is a forced intelligence. The mistakes they made are easily brushed off. They obviously drag the protagonist into such troublesome things every time. For example, when Voldemort was in Quirrell's body for the first time, the protagonist obviously had a better way and was dragged in by them, and he was injured, so they just brushed it off easily? The second time the protagonist clearly said not to tell others about his affairs, but Harry Potter still told the matter to the notebook, which put the protagonist in such great danger, and just brushed it off easily? I just don't understand it. It feels like everyone in the good camp is trying to morally kidnap the protagonist, but the protagonist will never refuse.

It's beautiful. The author's writing is good.

The author writes very well. The later chapters can make people feel tight and short of breath, making them extremely unhappy, and can turn a good mood into an extremely irritable one. It's particularly frustrating to want to scold the protagonist. It is suggested that you should help others even though you are wronged. If your family is strong but you are morally kidnapped by others, you should not say anything. You have not benefited at all, and you should give your precious things to others. I suggest you not to look at them. I just suggest not to read it later. If you think what I said is not good, there is nothing you can do about it. I just use my own feelings to express the meaning. Whatever you think is good is fine.

It looks absolutely beautiful. Slytherin has good reviews and has the brains to pretend. OK, I paid for the dog-licking article by mistake.

Can you please not let Hermione be the heroine?

Recently, many people are talking about the scene where Abe is injured, saying that the protagonist cannot just let it go, otherwise he will give it one star. My point of view is: it really cannot be calculated like this. I mainly write about the scene where the protagonist seeks justice for Abe. It will make the trio feel ashamed, which will be a great point. I believe many people think so. I just saw Gran stealing Ayawn. What will the protagonist do after he finds out? Very excited. But if you just brush it off like this, I will feel very uncomfortable, and it may become a poisonous point in the future. Depending on the author's writing style, Harry and Ron should be two people in opposite directions in this book. As for Grant, it doesn't matter whether the relationship is restored or not, it won't have much impact. In short, the whole book is well written and has a good story. There is still some potential, I hope the author will work hard!

I think I will give you the best square this time. I have to say that I think your writing is very good. This is a personal feeling, but it is much better than the novel I read before (｡ˇε ˇ｡) But I don't like Hermione. Whether it's a movie, a book, or a fan, I don't like him. I don't like the other two protagonists either! I think the author wrote it this way, so he definitely wanted to train Hermione to be the wife of the protagonist, but I don't agree with the first one that broke up the CP in the original work, and the second one that Hermione itself does not meet all aspects of our protagonist. And in the book, you also wrote that he chose betrayal in a tangled situation, so he should not choose the so-called forgiveness later, but I have to say that the protagonist is set up very well by the author. Although I find Hermione annoying, I don't have a lot of malice towards the protagonist forgiving Hermione. After all, it is the decision made by the protagonist (ー_ー)!! I sincerely hope that the author can not make Hermione the wife of the protagonist. I am not making a decision for you, it is just my suggestion, but I hope the author can take this suggestion more seriously, because I read a lot of comments and they are very annoying. If possible, you can consider creating a new character. After all, this is a fan, it doesn't matter if there is one more╮(╯＿╰)╭ But no matter what? I still like the books written by the author (quietly, it would be better if there was no Hermione). I hope the author will continue to work hard and look forward to your follow-up^ω^ In addition, if Hermione disappears in the future, I will change the rating. If Hermione disappears, what will I do? I have to give it five stars, right? I think no one should have an opinion on this! (*'▽'*)♪

How did this book get rated 6 or 2? I don't understand Tomato's scoring mechanism, but I really think this one among HP's fics is pretty good. Have your own worldview. The characters also have their own characteristics, and of course it may be that Rowling wrote them very well. It left a lot for authors who write fan fiction. If you read on patiently, you will find that the upper limit of this book is very high and will not end with the ending of the plot of Deathly Hallows. Some people say that it is Hermione's characterization that lowers the rating, the protagonist's maintenance of him, and his degradation. Emmm, what should I say? Maybe it's because the author likes Hermione in the movie very much (anyway, I think she's very good-looking), and he doesn't need to be particularly rational about emotional matters. That's nonsense. Moreover, many Tomato books are meant to store the brain. At least this book was very enjoyable for me to read. My own Chinese skills are not good. It's hard to say that I can express my thoughts and opinions very clearly. I just saw a lot of low scores and some comments, so I expressed my feelings. Especially when I saw a one-star review after watching 58 minutes, it mentioned a lot of flaws. Said Dumbledore couldn't feel Abu's breed. It's said that it's down to using family favors to protect Hermione. Please look back, okay? . . Of course, this is a 22-year-old evaluation. Maybe I didn't write that many books at that time, so I may be more arbitrary. . . . . It may be that a book needs a relatively long story to spread out its macroscopic view of the world. And I happened to read this book at the end of 2003. I read more than 600 pictures in a row and felt the charm of the book. But if I only read a dozen or twenty pictures or one or two hundred pictures, I might feel that it is a bit much. Some characters really make me feel sad. Just disgusting. Haha, this may be the charm of the novel, there are some conjectures of my own. If you have any good HP fans, please come and recommend them to me. Any platform is fine. Some of the things written are so poisonous that I can't stand them. Some just add a character to the original work and follow the main plot to the finale. I can only say 66.

It's pretty good. The female lead question can be Pansy, who played the role of a killer in the movie and is not too cold? Luna is okay, but not Ginny (Ginny is purely because I have never seen anyone who is his heroine). I have no objection if it must be Hermione (if you don't like it, don't criticize, you are right, ah, right, right)

Many fanfics are mixed with a lot of original content (maybe they are just women's novels? I mean the perspective is the female protagonist), but the author has made some additions and changes based on the original work. It gave me some expectations. At the beginning, I felt that the author seemed to exaggerate the big boss in each issue. But it's normal to think about it later. After all, the male protagonist is not Harry Potter, the savior, and there is no Dumbledore to protect him. So it is indeed a bit difficult for the male protagonist. But I think it's still a bit difficult to write. (Maybe it's a matter of my personal senses) There is no heroine yet, but the author seems to be leaning towards Hermione as the heroine. However, many readers think Hermione is not good enough to be a heroine because Hermione in the book has too many shortcomings (I won't go into details, but some readers may have mentioned one or two in the comments), and I think so too. In addition, the writing of the male protagonist is a bit too soft, not very soft, it just feels too gentle and gentle. ... Well, I can't describe it. Apart from these two shortcomings, I didn't find anything that was bad for my reading experience.

The overall overall concept (Harry Potter's spin-offs The Lord of the Rings and The Chronicles of Narnia are an infinite flow novel with relatively new themes). The author insists on updating it, but there is a reason why the book's rating is not high. The protagonist has a broken personality and constantly needs to be interrupted. He has always been dragging down his teammates. On the other hand, the author's writing style is completely new in this Infinite Flow novel. It can definitely be written better. I think there must be many people who can't bear to abandon it after seeing the protagonist being deceived over and over again and still having fun with the three little ones. It's outrageous. On the other hand, the author also has a certain skill in shaping the villain characters in a plot (the three little ones in the early stage and the big cousin in the later stage). It is really uncomfortable to watch, but it clearly has the flavor of an invincible and cool novel, but it is not exciting enough.

It's so beautiful, I'll get one first. [Learned][Learned][Learned]

Overall, it's pretty good, but I hope CP isn't Hermione. I hope CP is a boy (if not, you can just hope that, after all, the relationship with girls is generally a bit useless). It would be better if the author could write the CP line better and create a new character.