One Piece: Starting on Onigashima as Kaido's Older Brother, Kaiser

The subject matter is novel and great. If I can go back to the ghost clan later and recruit some people with potential. Then, all the Devil Fruits obtained during the Rocks era were hidden, and there were one or two not-so-powerful phantom beast species, and then the ancient species were released. The pirates took off directly, and no one wrote about the ghost clan.

After such a long time, this is the most passionate Pirates fanfic I have seen. Every character has a soul and the image is three-dimensional. The protagonist is domineering and strong, it's really exciting to watch, and he also has a car, hehe. The taste has changed. It has changed since you started collecting green pheasants, and you are no longer decisive in killing them. I feel that the style behind it is similar to the original work, and it is like playing house. I don't understand what the purpose of collecting the blue pheasants is. If you don't help, what's the point of still forming gangs? There is no shortage of strong men. As long as the opponent's strong man dies, it means that your own strength has increased. Isn't collecting the blue pheasants just disgusting? A good and refreshing article, written by you into an infernal sense of déjà vu

5 Stars, looking forward to bringing the aunt and the cute and cruel black beard in the future [laughing]

It looks good. The subject matter is something I have never seen before. Great ps. Momonosuke must die.

The writing is so good, I would like to call you the orthodox sequel to One Piece [Adoration]! Oda is nothing! [Anger]

Personally, I think this is the best pirate novel I have read in the past two years. It can be seen that the author has his own understanding of the pirate world and related characters. This article is not a cool article, but incorporates many elements, including the breadth of the complex world of human nature, into it to form a unique pirate world, which is very worth reading. There are also some small suggestions. The protagonist is too strong and the protagonist may have too many women. Of course, these are just predicted development trends. Come on, author💪

This fanfic is different from other fanfics in that the protagonist is a pirate from the previous era, a native creature, not a time traveler, and knows some past events. Some readers say that the combat power has collapsed, but in fact the original work is messy to begin with, and the author is trying his best to pull it back and restore some of the combat power settings. The growth and death of the protagonists in the original book are not brainless. Some people say that the author is licking Sauron, but in my opinion, he is not. Sauron may seem to some people to be diligent, but in my opinion, Sauron is indeed very, very diligent, but his fighting talent and talent cannot be denied. Many of the settings in this book can actually be found in the original work or have some similarities, that is, regarding Sesel, probably because the original work is not just for adults, so some of them are not very obvious in the original work, but they are indeed too obvious in this book, but this enriches the content of the book. After all, the characters in the book are almost all adults, and they are pirates. It is normal to burn, kill and loot. I like this book very much. Of course, veteran fans of the original novel may not be able to accept some aspects of it, which is inevitable. Finally, I have to say, very good

The perspective is novel, but it's worth thinking about whether it will be unfinished.

The author's speed is five stars, and the writing is very good. I feel that the author is so humble. He keeps saying that his writing is not good [cover face][cover face][cover face][like][like][like][like][like]

Objectively speaking, the protagonist was well written in the early stage, but later on, the role of the protagonist was intentionally or unintentionally reduced a lot. It is okay to write other characters, but the focus should still be on the protagonist. Describe the protagonist more, and focus on the protagonist's first perspective. I have not said that I will not highlight other characters for you, but the focus is on the protagonist! ! ! Keep up the good work, author, I will always support you [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]