Pokemon: Starting with a Horsea

Give yourself a five-star review first Thank you fellow readers for reading my book. I will definitely add and correct anything you feel dissatisfied with. Thank you again fellow readers.

I originally wanted to give it five stars, but it looked too uncomfortable without the double quotes.

(This is a cool novel) How can I put it, the first part is good, but the plot in the second half is a bit slow, especially the Yveltal part. Normally it should be a big chapter, but it ends in a sloppy way. From that part onwards, the author seems to be trying to finish the work in a hurry. It is a lot rougher. I give it a five-star encouragement and look forward to the new work. Also, it's not that I don't like the heroine, it's mainly because the heroine was found extremely perfunctory. In the early stage, she didn't express what she wanted to express due to her lack of skills, which resulted in the emotional line looking sparse. Please be more careful, author.

It's well written and worth reading. Not interesting. This martial arts test is not interesting at all. The routine of the children of aristocratic families looking for trouble is too old. It was a little better at first, but then there were all kinds of internal conflicts within the family. The alliance is in chaos, I can't watch anymore.

I have finished listening to this book, and it is very good. However, I feel that the writing is not perfect enough. The elf used by the protagonist is not flashy. Although the system is blessed, the growth and combat have many shortcomings. But overall, it is good. It is a very good novel.

Okay, ok, very ok, but Lunayala appears too few times. If the Bai family hadn't disappeared, I would have forgotten about this elf😥, but it is still good, and it has a place in elf literature. I think it's pretty good-looking, but the score is so low, only 7:1. Is there anyone who can improve the score? I think it's pretty good. I think this book can get an 8 out of 10 points.

I feel that the protagonist becomes stronger too quickly. I should have a female protagonist in the future. Let the protagonist explore new secret realms and cultivate the strength of his brothers in the later stage. The strength of the heroine and the feelings of the heroine will make the plot fuller in the later stage and not seem empty.

The Dragon King starts very uniquely

I really like this book! Except it's a bit short, it's pretty good. The fighting could be a little more detailed! The heroine says whatever she wants! To sum up: ① It's a bit short ② The fighting should be detailed and realistic ③ The elves can let him learn two or three more skills! He will be gone I wish the author prosper, correct his shortcomings and make a lot of money8888888888888888888888888

I can definitely make Lunayara a female stand-up [smile][smile][smile]