Pokemon: Starting with a Horsea

I'll give myself a five-star review first. Thank you, my friends, for reading my book. I will definitely correct any parts that you find unsatisfactory. Thank you again, my friends.

I was going to give it five stars, but it looks so awkward without quotation marks.

(This is a lighthearted read.) Well, the beginning was good, but the second half of the plot dragged on, especially the Yveltal part. It should have been a long chapter, but it ended abruptly. From that point onward, it felt like the author was rushing to finish, and the writing became much rougher. I'll give it five stars as encouragement and look forward to the new work.

It's well-written and worth reading. This martial arts exam is pointless. The old tricks of aristocratic scions causing trouble are too cliché. It was a bit better at the beginning, but then it got messy with all the internal family conflicts and alliance chaos. I just couldn't watch it anymore.

I've finished listening to this book, and it's quite good. However, I feel that the author hasn't written it perfectly enough. The protagonist's Pokémon isn't shiny, and although it has the system's support, there are still many shortcomings in its growth and battles. But overall, it's okay; it's a very good novel.

It's great, very great, but Lunala doesn't appear very often. If the White Clan hadn't disappeared, I would have completely forgotten about this Pokémon 😥. But it's still pretty good; it definitely has a place in Pokémon literature. I think it's quite good, but the rating is so low, only 7.1 Points. Is there some kind of score manipulation? I think it's pretty good; I think this book could easily get an 8 out of 10.

The protagonist gets stronger too quickly. They should introduce a female lead later on, allowing the protagonist to explore new realms and strengthen his brothers. The female lead's strength and romantic relationships would add depth and richness to the later plot, preventing it from feeling empty.

The Dragon King's opening moves are very unique.

I genuinely love this book! It's great except for being a bit short. The fight scenes could be described in a little more detail! The female lead is optional! In summary: ① It's a bit short ② The fighting scenes could be described in more detail, a little more realistically ③ The Pokémon could learn two or three more skills! He was gone by then. Wishing the author continued success, that they correct their shortcomings, and make a fortune! 888888888888888888888888

I think Lunala could be made a female character! 😏😏😏