Conquering Another World with Naruto's Ninjutsu

Not bad, not bad, the pace is good, but it's only 80+ chapters. I hope it doesn't collapse in the future. The time traveler must at least have an infinite duration of partial doubling surgery, right? For kaleidoscope, use the twin Kamui Tsukiyomi Amaterasu.

I'm almost finished reading it, so I can't help but comment first. To be fair, the pace of the book in the early stages was okay, and everything was handled normally. But after the death of my two wives, the pace started to get messy. Everything about the lottery was taken care of in one go, and everything I drew was only mentioned later. There was no foreshadowing, and I wrote about my skills as I thought of them, and there was no deliberate arrangement. Then there is the skill duel. The following chapters are very dull. The only thing that makes me feel a little excited is probably the Eight Gate Dunjia opening the door to death. The other moves have no sense of surprise at all. Although I understand that the plane combat power is too high, I still feel that it is not a taste.

The protagonist and the villain's IQs are on the same level. The fighting aspect is extremely exciting and the visuals are very strong. Personally, I suggest developing a sideline. Those who achieve great things should not just do it alone. We must also learn to unite and organize forces. Even little people have their own stories, because they are little people. It is more relevant to the readers' feelings. Even if you don't write this book, you can consider this aspect for your next book.

The writing style is natural and smooth, without any bad jokes or awkwardness. This alone is enough for people to calm down and read this book. As for the plot, I see that the latest chapter doesn't have too many bad points, so I won't comment on whether the plot is good or not. At least it's comfortable to watch.

Very good, really good, I hope I can stick with it

It looks great and the logic is spot on. It's not like I'm invincible right away. It makes me look very comfortable. Maybe there are fewer people reading the book if it's not recommended. Come on!

Will the author's protagonist become Six Paths later?

Not bad, but the pace is a bit fast. But why is the rating so low?

The writing is very good, and the subject matter is also very good. Mainly because it appeals to my taste. I hope the author will not be unlucky.

This book is so good! Will there be six puppets behind?