Wuxia Crossover: I Just Became a Land Immortal, and Now I've Been Exposed

If we don't count first quickly, we will drop to one star ψ(｀∇´)ψ

I watched the ratings gradually drop with my own eyes. I think the writing is quite good [face covering] The progress is slow but everyone on the list has their own story, I think it can be read as a short story. Keep up the good work, author [Love], I hope you won't give up because of the comments. Well, I just read the new chapter and it really fascinated me. I take back my previous immature opinion. [Petrochemical]

I'm giving it four stars for the time being. Can the author please stop being stuck at this moment? After introducing so many people, I just wanted to see everyone's reaction when the protagonist was ranked first, but you happened to be stuck here. It's inhumane. This is the second review review. Author, I advise you not to mess with my mentality. I haven't announced the protagonist until now. I really want to see the protagonist's relatives' state after knowing that he is the protagonist, but you have written 156 chapters and haven't written it yet. Are you too watery? It's annoying.

I can guess the next part: Sword Demon, Yue Nv Sword

Luo Binghe waited for Shen Qingqiu for 5 years, Xue Yang waited for Xiao Xingchen for 8 years, Lan Wangji waited for Wei Wuxian for 13 years, Ye Hua waited for Bai Qian for 300 years, Sun Wukong waited for Tang Seng for 500 years, Yuwen Tuo waited for Ning Ke for 500 years, Huacheng waited for Xie Lian for 800 years, Feng Qingxue Baili Tusu has waited for 900 years, Nightshade has waited for Long Yang for 1,000 years, Bai Niangzi has waited for Xu Xian for 1,000 years, Yi Xiaochuan has waited for Yu Shu for 2,000 years, Su Jiuer has waited for Feng Xi for 3,000 years, Xiyao has waited for Feipeng for thousands of years, and Zixuan has waited for Changqing for three lives and three lives. And I have been waiting for your update. One day, one day, one month, a frail young girl was lying beside the bed, with a slight smile on her lips. Her outstretched hand trembled slightly, and tears shone in the corners of her eyes. The hoarse voice murmured: "Don't forget to update Don't think about it. I'm looking forward to your updates. I just want to continue reading the catalog and see how rhythmic you can be.

It's great, author. I've been waiting for the first one to appear. But it's been taking so long for Xu Fu. Can the first one appear quickly? Author, I have been waiting for the first one to appear on the list. If something goes wrong in the middle of writing Dugu Qiubai, I will really go crazy. I have been waiting for the first one for a long time. I am particularly looking forward to everyone's performance, especially Brother Zheng's mood, when the protagonist is exposed on the gold list.

I hope the author will continue to work hard! [Please update] Author, I hope you don't want to write more than 100 chapters for just one list, okay? I hope the author will continue to work hard and not stop updating [Like][Like][Like]

I just like to read this kind of thing. Come on, author.

The author's writing style is like the reincarnation of a literary saint, it's great! 1. The details are appropriate, the priorities are clear, and the ideas are clear. Carefully selected, the materials seem to be tailor-made for the theme. 2. Use the environment to highlight the emotions of the characters, blend the scenes, make the emotions appear in the scenes, and the scenes appear with the scenes. 3. The imagination is wonderful. It not only originates from life, but does not lose the reality of life, and is higher than life. It broadens readers' horizons and is full of artistic charm. 4. The description of the expression is vivid and vivid, and in just a few words, the character's personality characteristics are clearly outlined, and the character's speech and behavior have a distinct and unique personality. 5. The narrative is detailed and specific, the details are vivid and lifelike, the characters have distinctive personalities, and the images are full and vivid on the page. (50 Cents a piece)

It must be five stars. It's so beautiful. The author's writing is so good that I am amazed. You must read it. But I won't go into the content. It would be meaningless to spoil it. The author's writing style is the best [laughter]