In One Piece: Starting with the Rescue of Ohara

Although I haven't read anything about this book yet, one very important thing I saw is that Momonosuke died.

The new book is released, mainly focusing on some events and background stories twenty years before the original main story. Please read it with patience.

5 Stars. Celebrating Momonosuke receiving a lunch box

So far overall pretty good. The author continues to work hard, but I suggest that the author revise the novel's introduction to highlight some points, such as multiple female protagonists, such as Shuangwen. I think your current writing is very good, but the introduction is too bland, and you have also written some things that should not be written, such as relying on the original main line and other self-perceived shortcomings. Don't judge your own strengths and weaknesses. Readers have different tastes. If you deny yourself in your introduction, you will lose a large number of readers. I just came in after reading the introduction three times and running out of books to read. This shows how bad your introduction is.

I gave four stars because, author, you have really done your homework! I didn't give that one star because the system is too rubbish. Only the beginning and the end appear to be frozen in other places, which can avoid all the major events that are going to happen in history. Well, it can be good. Like this change

Momonosuke is dead, this novel must be followed

Five-star rating

The plot logic of this book is the most comfortable one I have ever read.

Isn't the protagonist's teleportation fruit the Flying Thunder God in Naruto?

I think this book is very good,