One Piece: I Take Down the Celestial Dragons from the Start

How to say it? Although there are some problems with the timeline, it's okay and I can watch it. The only thing I want the author to do is to write a bald guy in it. If there is a bald guy, it will definitely look better, right? \(//∇//)\Author, come on💪

Awesome, this book is the most enjoyable one I have ever read among Pirates fanfics. It's just the introduction that made me lose the desire to read it. Thanks to the recommendation of my second-rate roommate [Like] [Like]

Let me give you a five-star review. I read more than 200 chapters in two days. A comprehensive evaluation of the advantages and disadvantages is as follows: (no spoilers) The original plot is really good! ! ! Better than most pirate authors, well-founded and with a reasonable growth rate! I won't mention the title of the book. Compared with some books next door, the original plot is really full and not forced to mess up the pig's feet, which I like very much. It's not that I can't bear to accept Robin and Nami as soon as I come up. There is an original plot, and I am really satisfied with its grasp of the scale and distance from the main plot! . I'm not very good at reading writing. I just read it briefly and then memorize the plot. Rafter's writing is really good. Some people say they hired a gunman, but I won't comment here. The main reason is that the hidden lines are very well written, including Anilu and Alabasta, and the origin of the Elephant Lord. Really good. This is the author who can surpass 80% of One Piece authors. Some authors can't even write Raftel. Let me see how you end it. There are many dissatisfaction points, and they are undisputed dissatisfactions! But I still watched it until the end. There aren't a few chapters that I don't like that can punch the generals and kick the four emperors. It's better to say that I like this kind of chapter that conforms to the original world's battle lines. And the timeline is not messed up either. There is really no need to break the timeline for the sake of original plot. If there is anything else, forget it and talk about it later. To sum up, although there are many flaws, I still give it five stars.

I feel that if the author works hard to write tens of millions of words, it will definitely be a good book.

The work is good, but why are there so many girls summoned? Please give more roles to boys. Secondly, I hope the protagonist is not too strong, but the system can be slightly strengthened. Finally, I like to watch it, but I must keep writing and don't end it. I will always support you, come on.

It was okay before Chapter 152, but starting from Chapter 153, the system can be uninstalled, which is also novel. There is a refreshing flow in the system text, and it is obvious that the combat power has collapsed. Five stars are given to the content of Chapter 152, which is very well written.

[Smile][Smile][Smile] Congratulations to the protagonist for uninstalling the system. The plot of this book is relatively reasonable, but the update is a bit slow. I will follow up on the update. I hope the author will work hard.

I wonder if the author can include me and Chara in it (It is best to form a separate cp with chara)

Not bad! ! ! ! Very good, keep up the good work, author

Only it was discovered too early. We should wait until the war starts. When technology develops, nuclear bombs can wipe out the land [Thinking] I've finished reading it all, and I don't give it a high rating mainly because it doesn't have the refreshing feeling of a refreshing novel, nor does it have the feeling of being hidden away like a behind-the-scenes novel. The whole article feels like it's not all about kingship, nor is it overbearing, and none of it goes to extremes. At first I thought I was going to keep quiet and develop, but in the end I didn't choose to join the King's Shichibukai and started a war with the navy directly. After becoming the Yonko, I thought I could just keep discovering technology, but then the government unexpectedly discovered the military base and ended up directly going to war. After the armistice agreement, I thought I could develop nuclear technology with peace of mind, but unexpectedly continued the war with the government. Neither does it have the potential to develop science and technology and finally be crushed by civilization, nor does it have the exhilarating feeling of developing nuclear energy and nuclear bombs to clean up the land [Thinking]