I Become the Heaven, Earth, and Yellow Pagoda from the Start, Suppressing the Three Pure Ones

My brother, the author, don't be detached. You will finish the book in the future and you can play with the world. I have always wanted to read the Great Wall. There are only two or three books in the world. Brother, come on. When you write the world, I will give you a certification from a great god.

It looks good. I hope the author can update it faster. I also hope the author can write more beautifully.

Come on! ! The writing is very good, although it is too sloppy in some places and the plot is skipped. But the outline that should be written is well written, and it is not stiff! ! ! For example, the immortality of heaven, endless calamities, the purpose of the Chaos Demon God, Hongjun's calculations, etc. Come on, come on, come on! ! ! ! ! It is suggested that the author should not just let the old silver coin Hongjun succeed for the sake of water characters. The protagonist can take the position of Taoist ancestor after Longhan's calamity, destroy the way of heaven, and lead the advancement and evolution of the ancient world! ! !

It would be perfect if Buzhoushan and the twelve Tiehanhan could be saved.

Not bad, looking forward to future plots

To give a good review, I want people to read my review in the first sentence of the first page of this book.

So far, it looks pretty good Don't be so particular about the time period. Not all prehistoric times have to be written the same way, right?

Not bad, not bad haha

There is a lot of books to read, and the food and grass are of the highest quality😜

Come on, come on, come on!