The Soul of Laie

I definitely need strong support for my novel! 😍

Objectively speaking, the subject matter of this book is the dark and weird direction that I like. There are two shortcomings: the minor problem is the commonplace writing problem. I won't talk about this too much, just take my time. The most important issue is the sense of substitution. The most important thing in a novel is the sense of substitution. More than ten years ago, why did we enjoy reading fantasy novels? We are substituting and imagining that we are the protagonists. In this book, the protagonist turns into a soul-body light ball, lacking the sense of substitution. This book belongs to the infinite flow theme. The classic infinite flow theme is popular because many people have imagined what it would be like to become Tony Stark, Doctor Strange, and Thanos, and what they would do if they had a superpower of their own design. If this book wants to be popular, I suggest the author start with an infinite flow, travel through many horror movies, slowly gain many ghost abilities, and slowly become a ghost, and then the spiritual body is sublimated, but it is best not to become an invisible thing like a ball of light, such as the King in Yellow, you know it is a person or other creature in yellow, and then develop into Tethulu and control the rules. As a reader, I can only write a summary of the plot I want to see. Just like when I go to a restaurant as a diner, I can ask for what kind of dishes to order, and whether the braised pork should be sweet or salty, but I can't make it. I hope the author will continue to work hard. I will pay attention to every author who writes dark literature. Come on, and give the author a tip. Dark literature is still a niche. If you want to write a popular novel to make money, you can write a cold-blooded protagonist without a female protagonist, but it is best not to write anti-humanity stories. For example, plots such as cannibalism and child killing will be banned because mainstream thinking cannot accept them. For example, Samsara Paradise and Super Mechanic are two typical books without heroines. The protagonists are relatively cold-blooded, but they have not done anything against humanity (they cannot pass the review). OK, so much verbosity. I hope the author will write better books and get more and more fans. Bye.

He has brains and is decisive in killing. He writes very well, but if he writes too darkly, he may be banned. You still have to be careful.

Decisive in killing, no Virgin, no heroine, not bad!

Root awakening, domination, a bit like Soul of Negri

Gaga is good-looking, the protagonist is no longer a human being, dark story, alternative cannibalism

This reminds me of a book I read before, The Soul of Negri. Very well written, support 😁

I'm from a black bar. Come on.

I think it's okay, but some places could be described in more detail. You can read more about Xu Ming's Soul of Negri. I think the old chapter is very well written, and you can learn from it.

Come on, author! I think this book of yours is quite nice.