Immortal Radiance
仙芒
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 170k Words
- Genre
- Eastern Fantasy
- Subgenre
- Eastern Cultivation
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Fanqie
Synopsis
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In booklists 13
Real Cultivation! Cruel and Dark, with Characters Who Stop at Nothing to Achieve Their Goals!
Looking for books like The Old Snake’s Tale of Cultivation (The Old Snake’s Tale of Cultivation!).
Looking for Books by New Authors
Tell me about any good books you've got.
Utterly Evil and Inhuman
Dark Fiction, Decisive Protagonist, No Saintly Heroics: Handpicked Reads
Brash, cool-headed, ruthless, domineering.
Decisive, Dark, and Exceptionally Well-Written
Brothers, recommend me some books! All you veteran readers, come on in!
Dark Stories, Cold-Blooded and Ruthless, but Not Mindless
My lords, bring out your dark novels! Requirements: a cold-blooded, ruthless, highly intelligent protagonist. Preferably no female lead. No do-gooders, please! No do-gooders! No do-gooders!
Darkness, the Darkest Novels Imaginable!!!
Looking for Dark, Cold-Blooded Stories With an Emotionless Protagonist
The protagonist has a functioning brain, stays clear-headed, and is rational
Dark, Pure Darkness, Utterly Dark Novels
Something like Xin Ge's.
Looking for Dark Fiction About Cold-Blooded Nobles Who Put Self-Interest First
Dark aristocrats.
Dark Novels
Nothing slow-paced, please. Don’t recommend novels where the protagonist spends ages blabbering before killing a villain, or gets tangled up with a bunch of women.
Dark Stories That Stay Compelling From Beginning to End
Please Recommend Dark Novels With an Unsympathetic Protagonist!
Handsome guys and beautiful ladies, please do me a favor and share some of your precious books. I'll be eternally grateful!
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Actually I think it's okay. It will be faster to practice your writing, just like drafting a draft. You don't need to ask the reader to tell you. If you just spend a few days reading it again, you will have a lot of room for improvement. And most readers are unreliable, and readers are not writers.
Many sentences are inappropriately worded, and many descriptions and descriptions of things are very inappropriate and cannot withstand scrutiny. In addition, the narrative is loose and confusing.
What poems are you always dragging out? This is a fantasy novel about immortality, not a romance novel.
The author's writing style is a good reference to "Great Love", but I think the concept of the male protagonist in the book is quite strange. Isn't immortality the same as eternal life?
Please point it out if the writing is not good, I will correct it slowly. This novel, actually, I wrote this mainly to practice my writing skills. My main priority is the next one.
The writing style is very good, but the previous part is not attractive enough for readers. You can change the previous part.
It's a good book worth reading. The writing style is mature and steady, the concept is novel, and the plot is attractive. I hope the author will stick with it. Come on.